Roshan Mistry 11O Biology Case Study Mr Warwick
Should drug trials be allowed?
By Roshan Mistry 11O
Title Page Pg 1
Contents Page _ Pg2
Introduction Pg3
What is a Drug Trial? Pg4
Types of Drug Trial (Vitro Tests) Pg5
Types of Drug Trial (Clinical Trial) Pg6
How Can Drug Trials be Harmful? Pg8
How can Drug Trials Be Helpful? Pg8
Should Drug Trials be allowed? Pg9
Bibliography Pg 10
This case study will investigate whether drug trials are safe for people and animals. By reading this you will learn about all the benefits and risks of drug trials, whether it’s safe or not. The question of “Should Drug Trials be allowed?” will be answered in this case study.
I decided to choose this question as there haven’t been many debates about the topic so therefore people are unaware. By writing this case study I hope to inform you about drug trials. I also picked this question as I found it interesting knowing where medicines come from and why we assume they are all safe for us. It also lets us look at the hard work put into developing safe medicines for us to use and how much we rely on the scientists who develop and test the medicines.
Where does a new medicine come from?
Firstly, you will need to know where new medicines come from. When you are ill, you’ll visit the doctor and receive drug prescription. Little do you know about where the drug comes from and how the doctors know it’s safe to use. The drugs go through 2 stages before being licensed and deemed safe to use. The first phase is in a lab. And the second is on an actual human being.
A drug trial is the development and testing of a new medicine.
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Teacher Reviews
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**** This is a very good essay looking at the technicalities of the various stages involved in getting a particular medicine licensed to go on the market. In terms of the question 'Should drug trials be allowed?' though I do not think you have looked at the positives or negatives in in enough detail, the only time this was really looked at was briefly in the table at the end and in the conclusion. This should have been central to the essay and the technicalities of how it is carried out built in around the positives and negatives to do with drug trialing. The main argument against it is the ethical implications of testing drugs on animals before a lot is known about them and even paying humans to trial drugs as this puts people with low income particularly at risk.
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Quality of writing
The layout in the introduction pages is rather loud with the wordart, and should be simple times new roman black font to look more professional. The pictures have not been resized correctly and this detracts from the main point of the case study. Punctuation is missed out in some places, and including commas would make the text easier to read. Sometimes the grammar is wrong, so the meaning of the sentence is confusing to interpret. Otherwise, spelling, grammar and punctuation are average.
Level of analysis
The candidate only goes into basic scientific details about the actual testing process and does not explain the concepts very well. For example, they don't just test on animals to make sure the drug will work, they test on animals to see the different side effects, or potency of the drug. The language used in response to the question is quite simplistic. The conclusion is adequate, but the main focus of the essay or case study is only presented in one short table, and I would have preferred to see more information utilised to give the candidate a higher grade.
Response to question
The response the question overall is adequate. The candidate covers the background behind the case study thoroughly but should have provided a bibliography at the end in a proper format rather than just a list of websites. The main body of the essay is too short, but covers a range of ideas, and the conclusion is adequate based on the ideas discussed.