"Risky Rainbow"

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 “Risky Rainbow”

Ultraviolet

Ultraviolet (UV) radiation is the least damaging type of dangerous radiation.  The sun is the main natural source of UV.  99% of UV radiation emitted by the sun is absorbed in the Earths ozone layer.  It is also invisible to the human eye.

UV radiation comes with risks.  As it is an ionizing type of radiation it can cause cell damage.  As sun rays emit UV, it most commonly causes skin damage.  This is when the UV rays damage skin cells, and sometimes even killing them.  The damage caused by UV radiation usually only occurs on the surface of the body as it is not very penetrating.  Most commonly, UV causes sunburn, and in more extreme cases, skin cancer.  Eyes and the immune system can also be damaged by UV radiation.

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A positive effect of UV is that it brings about the production of  in the skin.  It also has other medical uses, and is used in florescent lights.

UVC rays are the highest energy, most dangerous type of ultraviolet light. Little attention has been given to UVC rays in the past since they are filtered out by the atmosphere. However, their use in equipment such as pond  units may pose an exposure risk, if the lamp is switched on outside of its enclosed pond sterilization unit.

X-Rays

X-Rays are most frequently used for medical uses. ...

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Grammar, punctuation and spelling are all done to a high well. The candidate communicates clearly and sentences are easy to read. The layout and paragraph structure is appropriate and well done.

The candidate discusses the properties of UV light well and clearly as well as describing its uses. The paragraphs are clearly set out. The candidate could have gone into greater scientific depth about the ionising effects to gain higher marks. The candidate goes on to explain both gamma rays and x rays very well.

Overall a very well done piece. The candidate responds to the topic very well and explains each different type of radiation very well. The way the candidate could have improved would have been to include pictures and diagrams to support text, wider or greater scientific depth and sources and a bibliography.