Should we spend time in the sun?

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Clinton Woollams

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Should we spend time in the sun?

In this GSCE coursework? I am going to write about should we spend time in the sun? I am going to answer this question by using secondary sources of information by researching on the internet. These are some of the reasons you might want to spend time in the sun: it can treat skin conditions like Eczema and it processes vitamin D in the body, which is useful because vitamin D is vital as it maintains strong bones. Some of the reasons you might not want to spend time in the sun are; it can cause skin cancer, which can seriously damage your body or at its worst it can even cause death ,sun stroke and also premature aging but I will tell you more about these matters later on. In my conclusion I will give my opinion if you should spend time in the sun based in what I have found.

Skin Cancer

Skin cancer can be a very serious disease and over the past few years it has been increasing rapidly, Skin cancer is mainly caused by UVA & UVB rays penetrating the skin. Skin cancer is becoming increasingly more common for several reasons: people are living longer, people are going on more holidays abroad plus many people still consider sun tans to be healthy. There are two main types of skin cancer: basal cell carcinoma, which can be treated easily and is not life threatening, and there is malignant melanoma which can be deadly if it isn’t treated in the early stages.

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Economical Factors

With the increasing problem of skin cancer it is costing the National Health Service (NHS) more and more money to treat this problem. As a solution to this the government could do more advertising campaigns to make sure people take more care in the sun.

 

People who spend a lot of time in the sun like farmers, builders and gardeners are more likely to develop skin cancer because of their prolonged exposure to the sun. It ...

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Wording slightly awkward in places due to minor grammatical errors. Conversational tone used, and first person which is not really good to use for scientific essays as it does not look professional, as essays should look unbiased and factual, whereas a conversational tone can make the essay look personalised.

The candidate explains the rise of skin cancer well, relating possible explanations for the rise with the cause, and some pictures to accompany it. The introduction is also good as it presents a balanced view of what the candidate is going to expand on throughout the main essay. The website is not entirely reliable as for an english essay as the source is from canada. The candidate also goes on to expand on problems caused by the sun relating to occupation, government propaganda and skin tone which shows good consideration of many other factors relating to problems in the sun. The graph used is also good to support their research. The conclusion is good as it considers the different balanced views on the good and bad points about the sun.

A good essay. The candidate explores a wide range of data and problems that the sun can cause concentrating on a variety of different factors within each group. The only thing letting this essay down is the lack of reliable sources, and poor grammar in places.