But there still are positive forms of alienation where one can distance themselves from negative influences that the community possesses, such as keeping away or leaving a distance for positive outcomes, there might even be the alienation from friends just to learn something in class and not be distracted, there are also minor forms of alienation such as playing online games most of the day because you get to play with people you know online rather than those that surround you. These are all forms of positive alienation and are usually chosen by the person rather than have it imposed on them so the product or result is positive.
To me alienation has many different aspects there are the social forms of alienation which can make you feel different even though you may be unique, but this still forms lots of constraints and stress as you would like to be accepted by everyone for whoever you are, there also maybe be forms of family alienation which may be formed by the death of a close relative or the divorce of parents, there are even the extreme versions where the parents are the ones abusing the child, along with this fits in the political alienation as it makes a group not just an individual feel like they are being isolated or exiled from a the community only because they are different, these are all forms of negative alienation that distance the community or a single person from the majority for whatever reasons may cause a lot of turmoil, and even cause death due to the amount of stress developed from being left out as a person does not long for riches, or beauty or strength but to be loved and accepted, but there may be the positive forms of alienation that involve distancing from negative influences for the better, to me alienation is a need and a burden, it is necessary to finish work in peace or to actually understand class work but it also connects with burden of where someone would never want to be left out of the majority just like the Thirteenth pig. Even though a person can live without alienation what the person wants is to feel like they belong and that they are loved by someone, so they can pass the same positive attitudes other than being alienated themselves and then alienating other people from their lives only because that happened to them.
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It is difficult to give feedback for this as I am not clear on which unit this work is for. Nevertheless I will give areas where the work could be improved. The lack of punctuation, specifically full stops is a problem as the readability of the work is affected. The second paragraph on page 2 for instance is (almost) one long sentence. Short sentences help in terms of structuring the ideas presented in a clear way that makes it easier for the reader to follow. 2/5