Commentary on the short story "In The Fall".

        Throughout the story there are many mannerisms that the mother and father do. For starters, there are points where they both are doing something with their hands. The mother talks with her hands (p. 8). The father wrings his hands out of stress and anguish (p.8). This seems to be his nervous mannerism. At the beginning of the story, he stands with his back to his family, staring out the window (p.8). I saw this as maybe a way to block out the conflict that was going on. At many times during the story, the mother tends to repeat herself. She continuously says “at least they are worth feeding” about the chickens. It seems as if she is constantly reminding the father that her chickens are better than his horse. The father, on the other hand, is the opposite. He rarely speaks in the story besides a few weak attempts at trying to keep Scott.

        Both characters seem to have very different personalities. The mother is quite headstrong and in a way uptight. I interpreted how her hair was severely pulled back, as a symbol of her wanting things in line and her strict personality. The father, however, is rather passive and obedient. He rarely shares his opinion throughout the story and is fairly quiet. The water, I thought, worked as a symbol of his personality. It was “roiled, angry, and almost anguished” (p.7). This is similar to his feelings about having to lead his best friend to his death. The mother is more outspoken than he is. Her opinion seems to be the way things go. At the end of the story, she “lets her hair down”, almost as if she was setting down all her burdens and worries for a minute. When her and her husband embraced, it showed that they knew that sometimes things could be tough. They also knew that they would get through it together.