English Coursework Newspaper Health Article "When will we finally understand what is good for us?"

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Part 2 Textual Bias, An Article about Healthy Eating for The Independent, Eva Lamadé 2011

Rationale:

In class we compared a variety of newspaper articles, analysed how the use of persuasive language influences the reader and we discussed the characteristics of newspaper articles, editorials and opinion columns. In this context we analysed The Independent as being quite impartial and meticulous while using simple but formal language. My topic, the influence of the psyche concerning keeping a balance in your body, was chosen after analysing a Mystery text about meals in war-time in class.

Writing an opinion column for The Independent makes me use strong verbs like “endure”, guaranteeing formal writing while constructing easy sentences to ensure a broad audience. The form of the opinion article enables me to express my view while reasoning properly; I achieve balance between textual bias and facts through use of emotive language whilst giving facts and scientific statements: Strong adjectives like “hazardous” persuade the reader while they become convinced through scientific knowledge and examples throughout history. As the effectiveness of quotes was explored in class, I include statements of specialists from different times of history as well as an author’s point of view to increase reliability. A balanced impression is given whereas the audience influenced through stylistic devices such as alliterations, “absolutely altered”, “lowering levels”, rhetorical questions, tricolons crescendo, “trust in, belief in and rely on” and isocolons “she told her it was unhealthy. ...she stated, they were affected with Salmonella.” Analysis of The Times’ articles lead to rhetorical questions, the introduction about personal life experience as effective persuading and the short paragraph ending with a colon. Changing declarations are shown and analysed critically; it is illustrated how scientific proclamations change throughout history, giving the recommendation to be aware of one’s body’s signals.

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Overall, the ideological influence of the 21st century is perceptible through the article reflecting the current knowledge. I not only explored how statements are shaped within the culture and the time they are written in, as there was political pressure on scientists to discover new knowledge in former times, but I also learned to think critically about scientific statements and increased my awareness of the difficulty to uncover the truth about certain assertions.

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Task: Part 2 Textual Bias, Opinion Article about Healthy Eating for The Independent

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