English: Creative writing piece

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John Abarshi                                                                                                                                                                                     English  Moderation task : Creative Writing Piece Due: Wednesday 13th October 2010 Word Count : 897 words Washington crossing the Delaware River by Emanuel Gottlieb Leutze made in 1851 It was a week before Christmas day in the year 1776. The wind was cold and hard as it brushed past my face. I felt a chill run through my spine, but for the glowing sun, the cold would have been unbearable. “Why won’t God give me a break?”, I thought. I was thinking about something, how the problem we were faced with would be solved, even if only temporarily. As the wind rushed by and I stood there thinking deeply, it came to me all of a sudden. After that, I pondered over and over a plan until I had it perfected to the last detail, then I simulated the results in my head. Ninety-nine times out of hundred it failed,
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but that one time it didn’t fail provided me with enough hope. Moreover, you don’t undergo a revolution without taking some risks. I thought about how my plan would diminish British and Hessian power and cause them to take us, the Revolution and I, seriously. Just in August I remembered, my army had being exhausted, demoralized and uncertain of its future. We had been invaded by British and Hessian troops and we hadn’t been ready for them. We were forced to desperately escape to the island of Manhattan. However, the British had followed us to Manhattan and compelled us to ...

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