Alice Walker has modeled the main character in this poem after herself. The poem depicts the inner dissatisfaction, which seems to be imaginary, of writing

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I Said to Poetry

How does the poet of the following poem present her confrontation with Poetry? Comment on the poet's originality (such as the use of her imaginary conversation with poetry), the language used and the liveliness of the poem.

        

Alice Walker has modeled the main character in this poem after herself. The poem depicts the inner dissatisfaction, which seems to be imaginary, of writing poetry. The poem has been written such that it exemplifies the silly, yet consequential squabbles with one's conscience or with another person and their stubbornness in refusing to accept what is the obvious, which makes the poem easier to understand. The poem has been expressed in a point for point rebuttal, with all of the poet's comments being rebutted by the imaginary character- Poetry. This character is likely to be her conscience with whom she has conversations at 5 in the morning.

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The language used is simple, understandable and flows along the lines of a conversation, e.g. " I wasn't sad or anything, just restless." That line also shows that Walker cannot live without poetry and only feels complete otherwise.  The humorous banter seen may also be an example of a parent-child squabble, which makes it easier to identify with, knowing that the all-knowing parent, in this case, Poetry, will win the squabble, despite all the reasoning Walker gives.

 The lines, "... you have an eye to see it with" and "... and you still had one good eye ...

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