Whirl up, sea—
Whirl your pointed pines.
Splash your great pines
On our rocks.
Hurl your green over us—
Cover us with your pools of fir.
The structure of the poem is simple, nonetheless, it imposes great impression on readers—David claimed that the effect was instant (1976, p.338). The poem does not include any emotional expression. It only presents two images, the pines and the sea and they seem to blend into one single image. Further description or expression of emotions would be redundant or damage the seemingly single image. The rigorous poem structure of the Classicism and the image, which Imagists place emphasis on, are fit well into one another. Another poem that fully displays the compact structure of Classical Poetry is “In a Station of the Metro.” There are only fourteen words in this poem:
The apparition of theses faces in the crowd;
Petals on a wet, black bough.
Once more, none of the words could be expunged. The poem could be compared to one of those Impressionist paintings, which are only composed of simple lines and colors of contrast. Even though what is contained in a poem or a picture is limited, the space allowed for imagination is infinite. What is fascinating about Imagist poetry is that the expressivity under its condensed structure is immeasurable. However, some people also pointed out that this form was tremendously limited (Hughes1972, p.45) and discussed the losses it incurred. It is yet important to recognize the efforts of imagists in seeking for a new poetic structure.
Unconventional Form: Vers Libre
It should be known that the Imagists did not exactly copy the artistic skills of the Classical poetry, especially that of Greek poetry, but that they selectively inherited the merits and developed them. The breakthrough the Imagists made with regard to rhythm and rhyme is most noticeable. One of the advocacy made by Ezra Pound was that poets should “break away from iambic pentameter” (Peter 1999, p. 68). Obvious or strict form was rarely seen in Imagist poetry. Imagist poetry has nearly abandoned the traditional form of poetry and was in its pursuit of vers libre. Viewing from a panorama of modern poetry, vers libre is actually the mainstream poetry form. Imagists thus can be claimed as the precursors of the free verse. What Imagists focus on is the rhythm of a poem, the “innate” rhythm of the poetry language; “the whole poem must be rounded and recurring as the circular swing of a balanced pendulum” (Martin 2009, p.16). Pound believed that poets should not end a poem exactly at each line to conform to the traditional poetic form but should “let the syllables so fall as to increase and continue the movement”, achieving the uniformity and harmony of a poem. “Oread”, which is mentioned above, is not a poem with strict poetic form. Nonetheless, it is not regarded as non-poetic. The whole poem revolves around “sea” and “pines”; each line is closely followed by the next line. In addition, the poet adopted the method of appealing, which renders the emotions of the poem sincere and passionate. That being so, a poem lacking a strict form does not necessarily mean that it is not poetical but that it is allowed more freedom to establish smoothness and harmony. Nevertheless, free verse cannot escape criticism. It was assailed by the Professor John Livingston Lowes (Hughes 1972, p.65) that it may not be as well converted to the English language as French and by Padraic Colum (Hughes 1972, p.63) that “it is a poor form for wit”. Despite the criticism, it should be acknowledged that Imagists’ intention to pursue the idiosyncratic rhythm indeed freed themselves and the later modernists from the “shackles” of the traditional poetry form and permitted poetry to have more capacity to contain new themes of the times.
Innovative Content and Language
As for the themes, it is difficult to impose a description on what is included in Imagist poetry, which ranges from flowers, grass, trees in the nature to many aspects of the modern city life. Imagists believed that modern life had its own values. The great changes taking place at the outset of the twentieth century undoubtedly would draw the attention of the Imagists’ and their poetry would inevitably reflect certain aspects of modern life. This is exemplified by a poem “Evening”, written by Richard Aldington.
The chimneys, rank on rank,
Cut the clear sky;
The moon
With a rag of gauze about her loins
Poses among them, an awkward Venus—
And here am I looking wantonly at her
Over the kitchen sink.
With a modern meaning behind, the moon juxtaposing with chimney presents a fresh image towards readers. The moon in Romantic poetry is gentle, soft and romantic. In contrast, the moon here is foul and degraded. What the poet inclined to reveal was that the industrial pollution had damaged the nature and expressed his disgust and contempt towards the pollution, which can be deemed as the modern feature of this poem. Another poet who based his poems mostly on urban life is John Gould Fletcher. The city life under his pen hardly arouses any aesthetic feelings in readers’ mind. The following is an extract from “Dawn”:
Sleep oozes out of stagnant ash-barrels,
Sleep drowses over litter in the streets.
Sleep nods upon the milkcans by back doors.
And, in shut rooms,
Behind the lowered window-blinds,
Drawn white faces unwittingly flout the day.
Ash-barrels, milk cans, window-binds, which are the articles in everyday use in modern society. Glenn explained that the poet glanced at the articles every now and again as they were evidence of the ugly and pain-causing world (1931, p.90). Fletcher did not laud the convenience the above items bring to people but exhibited their dullness and ugliness. The poet was living in a vigorous modern society, enjoying all the advantages of modern life; the city under his portrait was unexpectedly lifeless. What’s more, Dawn should be a symbol of vitality, but it also appears to be tedious, boring. It can be assumed that the poet attempted to inform the readers that urban life was unanimated and without aesthetics. Referring back to the “In a Station of the Metro”, it can be realized that Pound also chose metro, one of the symbols of modern society, to present the impact of modern civilization on people. “The apparition of these faces” can be understood as people in the fast-paced society are gradually detached from nature and eventually lose their identities. It should be noted that the reflection upon and criticism against the modern civilization is not only one of the significant themes of Imagist poetry, but also one of central themes of modern literature.
It is no denying that Imagists poets were inspired by Modern society and urban life to create the new theme mentioned above. Since the language of poems cannot be separated from the content, it is reasonable that at the same time they also demanded to free their language. Imagists contended that the language in Romantic poetry, which is seemingly gracefully, actually deviates from the real life. They believed that the development of the society had rendered poems universal, which means that poetry should no longer belong exclusively to the upper class and the language should be that of everyday communication. As a consequence, opposing to the romantic language which they regarded as superfluous and flowery, they proposed to stress on the accurateness of the words and ‘design their poems in a more conversation-rhythm pattern’ (Peter 1999, p.122), which means that they would opt for a more conversational language in their poems. It can be observed that the language used in Imagist poetry is rarely genteel but is fresh, vivid and full of vitality. One of the poets who wrote poems typical of this language is William Carlos. He advocated applying into poems everyday language other than the obscure language, which can only be comprehended by few people. “Red Wheelbarrow” is one of the modal poems which utilize the simple language.
So much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens.
The language in this poem is considered by Robert (2004, p.73) as a usual prose sentence divided into an unusual manner. The simplicity of the language seems to blur the boundary between poems and prose, which also challenges our idea of traditional poetic language. Despite the language, the poem succeeds in portraying a picture which manifests colors of contrast and combines the animated objects with the motionless ones. The leaden sky, the red wheel, and white chicken set off one another. This kind of everyday language and visually vivid description slowly came into use by other poets, especially after the WWⅡ. It again proves that Imagists were at the front in the modern poetry movement.
Image and Consciousness
In Imagist poetry, images and consciousness, or rather, sub-consciousness are closely related. Pound tried to introduce the idea of sub-consciousness when defining what an image is. In his words, an image ‘is that which presents an intellectual and emotional complex in an instant of time’ (Martin 2009, p.12). Pound divided images into two types: one is objective image and the other one is subjective image. Objective images are those poets sensed from the outer world while subjective images are those that are embedded in poets’ mind. At the moment when an objective image comes into a poet’s mind, a subjective image will immerge from his sub-consciousness and merges with the objective image, thus leaving him a profound impression. To be specific, the faces Pound saw “In a Station of The Metro” provided with him a strong objective image, which evoked the subjective image, the petals on the bough in his sub-consciousness. Pound thus unconsciously placed these two unrelated subjects together, which is a poetic technique called juxtaposition. However, since sub-consciousness is something that cannot be easily figured out, poets themselves sometimes are not even able to explain the relation between the two images even though such relation does exist in the poets’ mind. The process of analyzing a poem can be deemed as a process in which the readers strive to reach down to the sub-consciousness of the poet to explore the relation between the objective image and the subjective image. Similar to “In a Station of a Metro” is “Oread”, which was mentioned above. The latter poem consists of two images as well, the objective pines and the subjective sea, which, though, are more integrated and inseparable than images in the former poem. The last example to be taken for analysis is a poem from James Joyce, “I Hear an Army”.
I hear an army charging upon the land,
And the thunder of horses plunging; foam about their knees:
Arrogant, in black armour, behind them stand,
Disdaining the reins, with fluttering whips, the Charioteers.
They cry into the night their battle name:
I moan in sleep when I hear afar their whirling laughter.
They cleave the gloom of dreams, a blinding flame,
Clanging, clanging upon the heart as upon an anvil.
They come shaking in triumph their long grey hair:
They come out of the sea and run shouting by the shore.
My heart, have you no wisdom thus to despair?
My love, my love, my love, why have you left me alone?
Strictly speaking, James Joyce is not an Imagist and this poem cannot be considered as a pure Imagist poem. Nonetheless, images play an important role in this poem. It is not until the end of the poem would readers realize that what the poet actually intended to present were the feelings of being jilted. The army is not a real image and it only exists in the sub-consciousness of the poet. The army thus could be explained as an illusory object, into which the feelings of being disappointed in love are developed. Joyce is a master of stream of consciousness, the technique of which he incorporated into exhibition of the images. In this way Joyce presented the image through sub-consciousness, which provides reader an image with deeper meaning. Though the juxtaposition of objective images and subjective images does not occur in this poem, the relation between the image of the army and the consciousness of poet is obvious. Throughout the literary history, it is not difficult for one to discover that at the time when the Imagist poetry came into being, it is also a period when sub-consciousness became a popular subject. One of the main features of modern literary work is the shift from the outer world towards the “inner world”, which is the mind. Modernist began to pay attention to the spiritual world of every individual. Ulysses and Mrs Dalloway are two of such modern novels that explored the sub-consciousness of an individual and there is a transition from the images to the consciousness and eventually the images fuse with the consciousness. From what is stated above, Imagists seemed to be among the pioneering groups who introduced sub-consciousness into literary work.
Conclusion
To conclude, even though there may be some criticism against Imagists, they are still considered as instrumental in the development of modernist work. Imagists took out the first step in standing against the traditional practices. Imagists can be claimed as the avant garde of the modernism considering that they were exponents of Classicism and that they determined to break free from the conservative forms of poems, which turns out that allusion to mythology and adoption of free verse also appeared in later modernist work. Imagist poetry was advanced in that these poems provided with later poets a vaster theme to explore, modern society and urban life; its conversational, more down-to-earth language enabled itself to be recognized by other modernist writers. The last reason that the Imagist group is seen as one of the progenitors of modern literary movement is that it succeeds in anticipating that sub-consciousness would be inserted into the following modernist work. Imagists were successful in opening up a new ground for following modernist writers to explore.
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All the poems cited in this essay are extracted from Imagist Poetry edited by Peter Jones, 1972.