Paul's secret of secrets was his wooden horse, that which had no name

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Paul’s secret of secrets was his wooden horse, that which had no name. Since he had grown too big for the nursery and a nursery governess, he had his rocking horse removed to his bedroom at the top of the house.

“Paul, aren’t you much too big for riding that horse”? Asked his mother.

“Well you see, until I can ride a real horse, I want to make do with this toy one.” Replied Paul

“Do you have fun while riding the horse? Why not play with your friends; after all, it is a brilliant day? His mother questioned.

“Not now, maybe after the Derby.” Said Paul.

“Alright then, but I hope you grow out of it soon, what will the visitors think?”

The horse lay, unchanged in the corner of Paul’s room. It was well used and was about to break due too the immense pressure Paul put on it.

The Derby was drawing closer, with only two weeks left; Paul still had not found the winning horses. However, he would not give up hope and he still rode the horse, sometimes frantically for an answer. The voices in the house were still getting louder as everyday piles of bills and CCJs dropped onto the rough mat underneath the letterbox. Mother picked these letters up and cried,

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“Oh I wish, I could seal the post box, cut the telephone wire, and disable the doorbell.”

Mother was looked stressed out, she needed a holiday, and after all, in two months, Paul would be going to Eton. The fees were another thing to worry about. The voices in the house screamed again, “There must be more money, there must be more money”!

Three nights before the Derby, mother went to a party at an old friends’ house. She left Paul alone with his two sisters. She dressed in style, one would think that she was well ...

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