Poetry Analysis - I Took my Power in my Hand by Emily Dickinson
Jacob Wang
April 20, 2004
Period 5
Poetry Analysis
I Took my Power in my Hand
by Emily Dickinson
I took my Power in my Hand—
And went against the World—
‘Twas not so much as David—had—
But I—was twice as bold—
I aimed my Pebble—but myself
Was all the one that fell—
Was it Goliath—was too large—
Or was myself—too small?
At first glance, “I Took my Power in my Hand” seems like a short, simple poem. However, the poem actually conveys the poet’s puzzlement about a failure. In the first stanza, the poet reflects on her actions. This reflection serves to let the reader know that the poet did something against a greater power, something like a David vs. Goliath, but with an even more diminutive hero(ine) against an even more incredible giant. Perhaps her Goliath is a law that she opposes or a corporation she feels is corrupt. Regardless of the “enemy,” the allusion to David and Goliath serves to show that the poet is clearly undertaking a difficult task. The second stanza expresses the poet’s bemusement at her failure, despite the difficulty of the task. She says that she clearly aimed her “pebble,” as David had against Goliath, but she was the one that fell. The reader can see that the poet cannot comprehend her failure. Finally, she concludes that there are two possibilities for her failure. Either her Goliath, or goal, was quixotic, or she was just not strong enough.