Camera cuts back In time to the same room, LOUCA, SHAH and PARKER are all drinking and playing cards round a table. Camera whizzes around showing drinking shots, smoking cigars and joking about. LOUCA after too many shots slumps on his arm, as the camera stop whizzing around. SHAH + PARKER are drunk.
SHAH cuts the deck without looking what card he gets and sticks the card to his forehead, it’s the ace of spades. PARKER does the same, he gets a six.
Music quietens so dialogue can be heard easily
SHAH – I bet you a ton
PARKER – Fuck it, make that a monkey
SHAH – You’re on buddddy
Both blow cards off forehead onto the desk.
BOTH – YEAH MATE!
PARKER – Nah mate I won
SHAH – You can’t get better than a fucking ace, especially not a six
PARKER – Ace counts as one, you can’t start on fucking two.
SHAH – Fuck it nobody wins, same bet, new cards. But this time ace is fucking high
PARKER – all Right
SHAH cuts the pack and sticsk a card to his head - King of hearts
PARKER – Oh fuck
PARKER cuts the pack and sticks his card to his head, An ACE
SHAH – OH FUCK!
Both blow cards onto table at same time,
As PARKERS phone rings SHAH pushes LOUCA onto the floor in disbelief.
LOUCA groans
PARKER – Shut up you twat I’m trying to take a phone call here
PARKER looks at his phone, it reads ‘SMITTY’
PARKER – Shit, its that Irish wanker SMITTY
SHAH – Fucks sake
Music stops completely
PARKER – Hello
SMITTY – Hello Parker, I got a job for you’s,
PARKER – oh have you now, last time we took a job off you we got a bag of sand for a relatively difficult mission, LOUCA here got his nose broken, and we’re still fucking wanted for it.
SMITTY – Oh No no, its completely different, I’m not in the dairy business any more. Oh no, this jobs strictly to do with diamonds, cash and cocaine.
PARKER – Ah, sounds more like our type of shit SMITTY
SMITTY – I knew you laddys wouldn’t let me down, ill send a man called O’DONOGHUE down to brief you. He’ll help you out.
PARKER Hangs up
Camera cuts to O’DONOGHUE standing on a corner looking shady, shows SHAH, PARKER and LOUCA approaching.
O’DONOGHUE – Alright boys, its like this
Camera freezes on him
NARATIVE –SHAH-We had two jobs to do that day, the first was intercepting some diamonds being smuggled in from south Africa.
PARKER – The second SMITTY assured us was to be even easier than the first. A Woman was carrying a briefcase with 10kg of uncut cocaine and £250,000 in cash at 1300 hours at the PLACE. All we had to do was get the case.
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Camera cuts to O’DONOGHUE, SHAH, PARKER and LOUCA in a hiding place, shows us watching two men walk from either side of a field, meet and shake hands.
LOUCA – Do you think its them?
SHAH – Of Course its fucking them, Two dodgy cunts here at this exact time, shaking hands
PARKER – What do you think their fucking doing, exchanging phone numbers
LOUCA – It’s a possibility
SHAH – Twat
O’DONOGHUE – All of you shut up + stands up, fires one shot, one man falls down, he fires another shot, the other man gets struck in the legs screams and limps around. He reloads his gun and finishes him off. +
ALL – Random swearing
All run down to the scene, SHAH takes the velvet bag of diamonds, O’DONOGHUE gets a envelope full of cash. *POLICE SIRENS*
Music stops
SHAH – COZZERS!
PARKER – LETS SPLIT, we’ll rendezvous at the next pick up point
Caned and Unable – Hi Gate
All split in every which direction
Camera cuts to LOUCA sneaking up on the next pick up point, He see’s hidden blokes who don’t see him, and immediately turns and runs
LOUCA – Fuck this Im out of here
Camera shows PARKER walking into the pick up point, he gets surrounded and GANSTER #1 grabs his shirt
GANSTER #1 – Where’s my fucking ice!
PARKER – I aint got a clue what your talking about + pushes him away+
Camera cuts to SHAHs view, over shoulder, he see’s parker talking to these strangers and shadys himself abit, says to himself
SHAH – What the fucks parker doing with those boys,
Turns round to get hit by a cosh in slow motion caned and unable kicks in on impact, you don’t see the attackers face, he takes the diamonds and runs off, camera shows SHAH lying unconscious. Camera goes back to PARKER
PARKER – Search me up, I aint got fuck all mate
They search him up and find a gun
GANSTER #1 – What you doing with a shooter
PARKER – Well you cant be too careful these days
GANSTER #1 – +Pauses for a second to think + This must be your lucky fucking day son, now get out my site
PARKER runs off and says
PARKER – What the fucks going on
Camera cuts to SHAH unconscious, he wakes up, realises he doesn’t have the diamonds, then subtly leaves
Camera cuts to O’DONOGHUE who walks blindly into the trap
GANSTER #1 – Search him
Caned and unable stops
O’DONOGHUE – oh shit
Camera cuts back to the room, LOUCA is in there, PARKER walks in and puts his gun to his head.
PARKER – You fucking snitch
LOUCA – Whaa?
SHAH walks in and puts his gun to PARKERS Head, then LOUCA puts his gun to SHAH’s head and says
LOUCA – Where’s the fucking diamonds
Then we edit back in the original scene with the triangle of guns, in between each speaking part we show O’DONOGHUE walking back very angry, very bloodied, talking of revenge
After SHAH says again – ‘Give me one reason why I shouldn’t kill you now’
Camera shows O’DONOGHUE kicking the door in from his point of view goes black for 2 seconds. camera cuts to GANSTER #1
GANSTER #1 – At least we got our fucking money back
Diesel power starts
Camera pans to some random man, view from behind walking alone tossing the velvet bag up and down, he jumps up in slow motion and kicks his heels Diesel power kicks in he carries on walking at normal speed with swagger, Titles roll up
A Tom Morgan + Matt Brown film
