Practical Critical Essay on 'Jude' Part 6 Ch.2.

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Practical Critical Essay on ‘Jude’ Part 6 Ch.2                                         16/01/04

p.336 “done because…” – p.337 “he had died”

        Little Father Time has just hanged himself and the other two children. Jude and Sue have just come across this scene of horror. Hardy cuts “upon the floor, on which was written, in the boy’s hand, with the bit…” into short segments with commas giving the narration a breathless effect. It demonstrates Jude and Sue’s feelings towards the scene they have just witnessed. These commas also fashion the sentence as if it were being spoken by a child. There is no complex diction in this passage so it reflects the innocence of the children involved, which is quite a contrast from the adult and gothic language such as “half paralyzed” and “grotesque and hideous horror” used in the last paragraph. There is a pattern that emerges so whenever the narrator describes the scene (usually the most horrific parts), he uses simple, unadorned, monosyllabic words, i.e. “the little bed”, and – placing the negative first – “no children were there”. However, when describing the parents’ reaction, he uses more complicated and descriptive lexis. This gives rise to an unnerving, disturbing feeling for the reader. The note written to Jude and Sue by Little Father Time, “Done because we are too menny” explains clearly, why he had performed this task. This is a succinct, poignant note written with what is either no feeling whatsoever or overwhelming but repressed emotion. However, “menny” indicates the pure innocence and child-like quality of Little Father Time and it shows us the level of his education. ‘Menny’ incorporates the word ‘men’ and his ignorance of spelling may signify his ignorance of the ways of man. Perhaps in the word ‘Done’ there is a resonance of Macbeth’s “If it were done when 'tis done” (Act I scene VII) emphasizing the horrific finality and decisiveness to Little Father Time’s actions. Sue provoked Little Father Time into reflecting along these lines of their being too many of them due to her conversation with him in the last few pages. He asks, “It would almost be better to be out o’ the world than in it, wouldn’t it?”, and she off-handedly replies, “It would almost, dear.” This careless reply and its tragic ramification is a result of Sue’s narcissism and the solipsistic nature of both the parents towards Little Father Time.

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        The language now becomes more elaborate and graphic as the children are no longer mentioned and the following paragraphs concern merely Jude and Sue. Sue realizes her careless words were responsible for Little Father Time’s actions. Her ‘convulsive agony’ that “knew no abatement” is powerfully personified, and implies that she is in the grip of someone who refuses to let go. The syntax, ending in the stark phrase “no abatement” makes Sue’s feeling even more infinite and absolute. She is so distraught that the woman of the house is “vainly trying to soothe her”, with her “eyes staring at the ...

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