Ably and uniquely using a variety of language tools to give his poems vibrancy, for example using alliteration to emphasise his subject ‘ships up street, the slave museum’ and using one long sentence to signify the train track and train sounds. You are in no doubt that he is on a train which is an excellent way of starting a journey, both his own and the collection of poems.
The last poem in the collection ‘The Arundel Tomb’ talks about a ‘stationary voyage’ in which ‘The earl and his countess lie in stone’. I feel that the enduring nature of the stone carving and the relationship between the earl and the countess demonstrates that after death there can be a legacy left behind after you have died that you were ‘here’ at all. If you don’t believe in any particular religion or life after death as Larkin didn’t then maybe there can be some comfort that life may not be futile and that death is not necessarily the end.
The love that is portrayed owes more to the ‘sculptors sweet commissioned grace’ then to the real relationship between the earl and the countess, although it is a wonderful epitaph to love and it allows us to feel nostalgic and hopeful that love or the illusion of love can endure beyond the grave.
Larkin uses e regular rhyme scheme to re-inforce the social status and stateliness of the earl and the countess, but also uses puns as ‘Rigidly they Persisted, through lengths and breadths of time…They would not think to lie so long. Such faithfulness in effigy’. The rigidly and lie puns make you ask yourself about this couple and their lives, and their relationship and help you to imagine the possible scenario that they were in love and the love lasted or that they were able to create an everlasting illusion of love. I can’t help but wonder if they thought that all literate people would not read Latin in the future or that time would erode the inscription away. The poet takes a strong word like truth and adds a negative prefix ‘untruth’ giving a negative image to the poetry and that the erosion with ‘The air would change to soundless damage’, adding emphasis to a slightly depressing tone.
Whilst there is a slightly depressing feeling with this poem that is quite a normal reaction when the thought of our own mortality and that of the people around us that we care for. This poem also infuses a certain optimism of the legacies that we leave behind us regardless of our personal religious beliefs, like the stone the effect of what we do can have a lasting effect long after we are gone: Larkins’ work has survived him and will last for many years to come, maybe as long as Shakespeare who knows?
Larkin chose to end this book on something that he loved (old graveyards and tombs) and is about the ultimate journey that we all will have to make sooner or later and as such is an excellent way to end the book.