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Tanushri Gukhool

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GCSE Drama (1699) Paper 1, Unit 1

Portfolio Task 1 (AO1) – Development

This freeze frame represents our interpretation of power, freedom and control. Starting with this as an opening scene, we sculpted around it to help us create a piece of drama. using everyone’s ideas we came up with different solutions and added them all together to create a well developed piece of drama.

(All the cleaners are busy cleaning Dina’s mansion. Maria sings as she cleans Dina’s special jewels)

Maria: (she places one of the necklaces against her neck, admiring them in the mirror) Am I ever going to own something as precious as this……so shiny and so exquisite. (Pause) Maybe I’m always going to be unfortunate. (Innocently places the necklace back in its box with a look of disappointment on her face)

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(Dina suspects Maria of stealing her jewels and walks out with a sinister look on her face, planning her move)

(Night comes and Sheila, Mary, Wendy and Dawn get ready for bed.)

Dawn: I really shouldn’t be saying this...but…(Hesitating)…I just feel really trapped in this house cleaning all day everyday…don’t get me wrong I love my job and I’m very grateful but…..well… (Hesitating…long pause)

Sheila: Hold on… (Glancing from side to side)…where’s Maria?

(Everyone looking around for Maria)

Mary: Well where was she cleaning today…did anyone even see her cause I didn’t?

(Pause…everyone thinks back)

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