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By Colin Francis

             I stood perilously surrounded for my fellow cadets. Looking towards the sky I could see nothing but rain gushing down. The sky was pitch black; it was 06:35am. I pondered to myself whether this was the day; the day I died. Looking round at the soldiers, I could see the nervous looks smeared all over their faces.

            We were in the trenches awaiting the enemy. I peered over to my friend Charlie; he was waiting in his trench. The rain was now coming down even faster.

“Think this’ll clear up?” I shouted at the top of my voice.

“Not likely” He bellowed to me. I was now taking deep breaths; this was only my second battle and my first experience was one to forget.

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            Glancing over to Charlie again, he was now closing his eyes and inhaling deeply. He looked pale, weak and scared.

“Are you alright Charles?” I said to him with a concerned voice.

“Not really, I’m scared. The last battle was a bloodbath. I was shot once in the arm. Fortunately it wasn’t to fatal. That made me see war in a different prospective; it’s a cruel way to die!”

         We were sitting in the trenches; it was filthy! There was: rats; mud; wrappers and decaying bodies. We were all ...

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