A Haunting Day in History

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A Haunting Day in History

     My mother had warned me not to hitch hike, but here I was, sitting next to someone I didn’t know, in a cramped minibus that couldn’t even reach fifty miles an hour, heading to Cromford Castle, amongst a group of yelling, spirited kids. Leaving the main road, we set off on a gnarled, rutted track that meandered like a snake through a dense forest, the impending trees’ branches entwined like spidery fingers, clawing at the overcast sky in an upward spiral. The incandescent beam of our mini bus pierced the engulfing mist like a spear as it proceeded deeper and deeper into the gloomy forest.

    Pulling slowly into the car park, the mini bus heaving out plumes of black, choking smoke from it’s diseased lungs, we saw for the first time the overpowering, castle that loomed menacingly out of the stroboscopic mist. Clambering out, the children went running off into the distance, closely followed by their teacher, trying in vain to herd them together, but to no avail. I was left, a solitary figure, his drabby coat flapping in the chilling breeze, whispering. I suddenly felt very isolated, and a shiver ran down my spine. There was a strange tension lingering in the air. Being in the company of those kids wasn’t so bad after all. I began my walk to the castle.

    The sky darkened, casting eerie shadows over the uneven, muddy ground. I knew then as I walked what the tension lingering in the air was. A storm was coming. Thunder reverberated all around me, ringing in my ears. Lightning flashed, illuminating the sky like someone turning on a huge light bulb. I began to get a little scared-, which was strange after an upbringing in Brixton. I was in the middle of a forest, with no shelter, and I was famished. As if it couldn’t get any worse, it started to rain. First a mere drizzle, then harder, more intense rain. Then the heavens opened. The noise of it was deafening. I had only ever seen this type of rain on a David Attonborough programme on the discovery channel at home. A sensation began to smother me, swooping over me in waves- I felt so, so… sleepy…Darkness.

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 I was walking, stumbling through the undergrowth of the forest. Through the driving rain, a flash of scarlet appeared, then vanished just as quickly as it came. What was this? I stumbled through some bushes- their sharp branches tearing at my face. I tasted salt in my mouth; I must have been bleeding. As I emerged I saw a boy dressed in a scarlet cloak, with a large drum strapped to him. At first I thought he might be one of the schoolboys playing a practical joke, but the sombre look on his face and the clothes that he wore ...

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