A Little Night Music

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A Little Night Music

I walked into the virtually empty bar and thick clouds of smoke immediately choked me. The room was dark and stuffy and it smelt like the windows hadn't been opened for years. It took a while for my eyes to adjust to the dim light. At the opposite end of the bar, a lonesome man sat staring at me. I uncomfortably looked around, searching in the dark for the familiar face of my friend.

Realising my friend wasn't there, I turned and headed towards the door. A low whispery voice came from the opposite end of the bar.

"Are you looking for someone?" There was something creepy and mysterious about the man- something intimidating that made me nervous.

"Yes, I was looking for my friend. I am meant to be meeting her, but she is late, as usual! I think I will wait outside."

"Don't go outside. It can be dangerous on your own. You never know what might creep up behind you and frighten you................to death!"

"I think I can fend for myself, but thank you anyway."

I fled out of the door and almost fell onto the wet, glistening pavement. The orange light of the street lamp was reflected in the puddles, which were dotted across the road. Droplets of rain fell from the heavy, black night skies, and ran down my pale face. I breathed a sigh of relief. I did not like that man one little bit, and instinct told me never to speak to him again.

I reached into my bag and pulled out my umbrella. A car drove past, spraying water from the road onto my feet, and drenching them. As I did up my bag, my purse fell out into a muddy puddle. I bent down to pick it up and noticed something shining in the bushes. It caught my eye and held my gaze. I became mesmerised by the mystical glare. I pushed my hand through the sodden leaves and reached towards the gleaming article. Under my fingers, it was hard and crisp, like a diamond. I pulled at it, but it did not come free in my hands. What was it that was lurking in the undergrowth? My fingers traced the shape of the thing, and it resembled the structure of a necklace. It was delicately formed with tiny chains linking it all together to create the circular figure. As I felt more, my fingers encountered a soft, smooth, clammy surface, which was wet and cold. The rain was coming down more heavily now, and I was almost blinded by the downpour. I grabbed at the icy surface again and realised what it felt like. I pulled it out of the bush, my heart beating fast. First an arm, then a leg, and then..........
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The face was astoundingly familiar. I suddenly stopped in my tracks. My stomach jumped into my mouth. I recognised those pale eyes, those high cheekbones, and those rosy lips. It was my dear friend whom I had arranged to meet.

Her ashen body was covered in scratches and deep plum bruises. Blood had congealed around the wounded areas, and she looked horrific. The clothing she had on was torn around her arms and her stomach. I scanned her body with feelings of disgust, anger, fear and sorrow. The knife that had killed her lay embedded in her ...

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