A small boat breaking through the teeth like waves made its way towards the huge ship. There was a man and woman on this boat;

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Ben Mandell      

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The glimmering moon’s light bounced off the rough seas that surrounded the vast unmoving battleship hovering in the water. The waves crashed against the hull of the ship like a castle overrun with soldiers.  The stars were like eyes watching your every move, like a jaguar lurking in the shadows. Apart from the boat, there was just ocean as far as the eye could see. The ship itself was huge and intimidating. It was once a mighty warrior but had now fallen from greatness into a watery abyss.  The ship appeared to be empty except for an eerie mist that obscured the bulkheads engulfed in its wake.

A small boat breaking through the teeth like waves made its way towards the huge ship.  There was a man and woman on this boat; the man was manouvering the little fighter through the maze of water and crashing waves. The woman sitting at the back of the boat shivered with fear. The man was tall and broad with short brown military-like hair. He also had a deep scar down the side of his face and a gun on the side of his belt. The woman on the other hand was timid and small. She looked educated and intelligent  - not a solider but a scientist. She had long blonde hair that was done up into a bun and pink rectangular glasses that covered most of her face.  

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She called to him quietly.

“Lt. Surge” He did not respond. She called again, this time slightly louder and with more confidence in her voice. “Lt. Surge!”  

This time he responded and turned his head to face her. “Yes, my dear Miss Pond.”

 “How much longer is this going to take?” she asked. “This place is giving me the creeps.” She moaned in fear.

“Not long left. Nearly there now.” He replied in a calm and steady voice.  The boat closed in on the ship while slicing through the fog resting on the raging sea. The man ...

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