It was really amazing due to it had beach supporting a domed base amusement, arcade and several fairground rides, including thrill rides, children’s rides, roller coasters and a log flume. The amazing thing was that the structure was unbelievable due to it was all on top of the beach.
They had rides for any age so it was quite good but on the other not so good because my two little sister wasted a lot of valuable time of mine due to me waiting and ensuring there safety. As we moved along me, my big brother and my dad was ready for the big rides meaning the rollercoaster. As we got on we had take of any jewellery due our health and safety. The ride lasted around a cheeky 30 seconds when we had to wait 30 minutes just for a 30 second thrill ride but it was worth it once a while I mean we don’t regular come here do we?
So we decide to go to have a splash about or to swim a bit in the chilled sea.
So we took of all our garments and we resized our selves into the swimming costumes that we bought. We tried to play volley ball in the sea it was so much fun that it’s indescribable. First we played in singles meaning one vs. one, mainly I was the champion overall, then it got boring so we decided to play in doubles it was quite fun but the we decided to have a swimming race.
We all got our goggle and inserted them into our sensitive eyes so we don’t get red eyes as my mum always tells me that always wear goggles when you go swimming.
So the race begun and I came last in most of the races. Then I we had a competition that who can hold their breath for longer under the water last one under the water wins and they get rewarded to decide where to go next Sunday. So 1 … 2 … 3… GO!! As my mum shouted. We could all see each other and had a waterproof stop watches as well, the stop watches was ticking to thirty five seconds when a MASSIVE creature came storming at the speed of lighting and bit my dad on the toes where he recently had a operation and everyone was screaming at the Brighton pier. Then my mum shouted RUUUNN!
The creature was chasing my family as if we had murdered the creature’s family or someone related to the creature. The creature was an unknown creature. We ran as fast as we can to save our life breathing heavily and gasping, the water we drunk during the journey of the way was dribbling like tap water out of our wet mouths. At last the creature disappeared into the thin air and left my dads body covered with thick blood with loads of gooey white bits over his face. There I was supporting my family as much as I can as my mum was yelling help! Help! And was crying deeply as there wasn’t no one around due to everyone escaped to a safe place when the creature was storming out of the sea. I rushed as fast as the creature to a phone box and dialled nine nine nine and shouted out “a ambulance please Urgently PLEASE “and hung up.
The ambulance came storming towards the pier and lifted my innocent dad and put him on a stretcher and on to the ambulance van. As my other family members such as my older brother and older sisters they were all trying to calm my mum down due to a tragic incident. The ambulance person said that my dad had a awful thing called cardiac arrest they explained to me and said its bit similar to a heartache and there for a minute or so my whole body shivered and I cried out loudly. As the ambulance rushed to the hospital I phoned the local taxi service to pick us up and quickly put us next to my dad for the support he needs and that is at the hospital.
I quickly paid the taxi driver the money he requested and rushed inside the hospital and ask the lady in reception for where my dad could be and they said go to 2nd floor 3rd room across. My family was there and we asked the doctor what happened he told us that if we have a puppy at home and we just remembered that we left him at the beach. The doctor said I know what could have happened, so the doctor explained and he said from a research it thought to be that the dog was a rare poisonous filthy puppy that when it contacts loads of water it turns into a creature, so we asked the doctor where could have he disappeared the doctor replied that he’s inside daddy’s body and that the only way it can be gone forever was by using a fire extinguisher because the creature is like a fire it can kill you if you leave it there for a while or if u use a fire extinguisher it will gradually go away completely .
As we heard news that daddy was conscious my mum ran and broke the steel door with a hammer and said “ohh my god why did it had to happen to you” and shouted out “thanks god your feeling much better now” as she said that the creature came alive again out of daddy’s body and my mum quickly rushed to get the fire extinguisher and she pulled the security strip off and fired at the dirty creature while she was crying deeply again and was shouting “ you ****ing creature I hate you go away from my family’s life”.
After that day we never thought of buying a dog or going to the beach again. We were luckily saved from a dirty disaster, thanks to the intelligent doctors working at Brighton helped out my gorgeous lovely caring dad.
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The creature
