Blood Thirsty

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Topic of the essay: Write a story ending ‘How we got away I’ll never know

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Title of the Essay: Blood thirsty

Blood Thirsty

I have been going to Cambie Public School since I was seven. Never had there been any acts of violence or any drug cases. That is until the coming of Mr. Rudy. Yes, the name does fit him well and he was more than just rude. He was known for stretching not your ears, but your nose if you did anything wrong. He was about six feet and a very well built man. Along with him came his beautiful assistant Miss Rosy.

  For awhile he kept his vulgar acts well hidden and trained many boys to become bullies by teaching them that the only way to succeed in life is to be mean and cruel. I know all this as my best friends John, Tariq and I had been invited to join their gang. John refused but Tariq and I, Zack thought it would be cool but we had no idea of what was to come.

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  The gang formed was called ‘spit fire’ and soon began to dress in a gothic manner. We all dyed our hair black, wore black and the girls began wearing heavy black makeup along with black nail polish.

  Though I was not the type to linger with such people I followed what all the ‘cool people’ were doing. Soon Johnny Depp was chosen as our leader and we began having weekly meetings.

  My mother being extremely religious and my father a strict man soon began to worry but I told them that it was all in ...

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