Creative writing based on great expectations

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“Hold your noise” bellowed a voice I stopped and held my breath praying the voice wasn’t shouting at me. After that I could see him from the back of the church where I was hiding, tall scary man, he looked dirty and was probably smelly.  He had my friend Pip and was yelling at him trying to scare him. I couldn’t hear what he was saying but he was chilling to look at and Pip had a worried looked on his face. Pip was pointing to something I guess he was pointing to where he lives with his older sister as his parents are dead. After that he grabbed Pip by his ankles and turned him up the wrong way, holding him up in the air and violently shaking him. I was so frightened. I think he was looking for money or food he might have needed it so he could get new clothes and see a doctor. Pip didn’t have any food or money so the scary man put him the right way up, sitting on the top of a tombstone.

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He was saying something to Pip, some thing that petrified him, I could see the back of his hands gripping on to the tombstone where the creepy man made him sit. The man was making Pip lean back more and more, he had hold of his arms and was pushing him. Next he stopped, holding Pip almost upside down again. At this point I moved a bit closer, I wasn’t going to let him kill my friend without a fight, I may have been small and absolutely terrified but Pips my friend and no one messes with my friends ...

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