Ghost Story - The Caretaker

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Lee Welshman 11AJ

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Ghost Story – The Caretaker

“OI LOSER! PICK UP THE CRAP!”  This is the way he always got treated.  No one gave a second thought about him.  They thought that just because he was the caretaker who picked up the rubbish, he didn’t deserve any respect…….but they wished they’d have gave him some.

  After 10 years of cleaning up after people who just didn’t care.  People who laughed at him for don’t his job, picking up their rubbish.  Peeling up snotty tissues in the rain in his bright yellow Rain Mack, whilst they laughed at him through the window, he pretended he couldn’t see them.  After 10 years or this, every day, he has had enough.  On his 10 yeah anniversary of being shouted at and just being disregarded, he had decided, this was it.  The end, for him anyway.

    He walked into his stockroom, the one they banged on the door every single time they walked past, every single person.  They thought it was funny, but they didn’t know that he sat in there crying, through the pain of how they treat him.  

  He didn’t even get treated right by the teachers; they shoved him in a room with the boiler.  This was it.  He walked, slowly, slowly walking.  But then he tripped over a mop.  He could imagine the laugher of the kids if they had seen that, then they’d run away with his rubbish picker and hide it, so he’d have to spend the rest of the day looking for it.  He couldn’t tell anyone, who would care.  

  He got back up and climbed onto the steel chair, and put the noose round his neck and tied it to one of the pipes.  He was rocking the chair, from side to side, slowly, trying to knock it from under his feat, but then, no, he wouldn’t let them know that they had got to him.  He wouldn’t give them that satisfaction.  He took the noose off from around his neck, and decided.  He was going to make a change.  He wouldn’t let them get to him anymore not matter how hard they tried.

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  He got off the chair, but then he slipped, he fell, the chair as well. The chair fell toward the boiler. He didn’t realise that when he had fallen over the mop it had knocked a valve off the boiler, gas was leaking out, he could smell it.  The chair was going for the boiler, he tried to get up but he hit a shelf and it fell off.  Cleaning products, bleach, and floor cleaner poured all over him.  This chair hit the boiler, and made a spark, then there was no more, he was no more…or was ...

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