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Haunted for life

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Haunted for life I arrived home early from school as I had forgotten my homework for Mrs Harrison. As I walked in my lounge my older brother Simon was sitting on the couch reading another one of his horror books. I don't know why but he is quiet fond of these sort of books. Simon looked away from his book and took notice of me. He stared at me for a minute and then I said, "Why are you reading another one of those stupid horror books?" He was always reading these trashy books, they don't scare me their only fairy tales. "I bet you would be scared if you and your friends was in a haunted house" said Simon It was like he actually believed this fairy tail book of his. "No I wouldn't don't be stupid its all a load of rubbish" I said "Okay then I dare you and your friends to stay in St Georges cabin in the middle of the countryside" said Simon. "Okay then" I said "Its all lies nothing will happen, I will go back to school and ask my friends" As I got back into school all my friends were sitting in the class room working. ...read more.


Me and Kelly were really cold. Jamie gave me his jacket and Dave gave Kelly his. As we walked further we began to notice strange noises. Me and Kelly were getting really scared so we held on to the others. I wasn't scared because I thought Ghost's were down there it's the other things that could be down there. The noises were really horrible and none of us liked the sound of them. Then there right in front of us there was a little cabin, "Is that it?" said Kelly "Yes I think so" I said "Let me go in and see" said Jamie "No!" I said "Not by yourself, I will come with you and then at least we will be together if any thing happens" We were all really scared and after all those noise's and every thing else I think I am starting to believe my brother and his stupid book! Me and Jamie walked down and looked inside, "I don't think anybody is in there" said Jamie "I will go in first" "Okay I will be right behind you" I said "You two stay out here and shout if you see any one or anything strange" I said "Okay" said Kelly. ...read more.


Dave was taking photos of Jamie so that we could use it as evidence, whilst Kelly was calming me down. The lighter was getting really hot and I dropped it and as I did I felt a cold shiver though my spine. "Kelly" I shouted "Did you feel that, that freezing cold breeze through out the place." "Yes I think somebody is in here" said Kelly We grabbed hold of each other and shouted for Dave "DAVE" We gasped. There was no reply. I crawled around on the floor searching for my lighter, whilst Kelly was shouting for Dave, I found the lighter and then all of a sudden I felt a drip on my head, I jumped up and panicked when I finally got the lighter to light I gazed around the room there was a pool of blood "It's Dave's blood" Kelly shouted Dave was lying on the floor next to Jamie. We started to cry as we ran out of the cabin I said "I can't leave Jamie" "Yeah well I don't want to leave Dave, but if we don't get out of here now then we are going to die as well" said Kelly "We can get help down here tomorrow" said Kelly "Okay lets get out of here!" I said. I still remember this now and it was 18 years ago. I will never ever forget! This has haunted me for life! ...read more.

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