I awoke with a sudden shiver. I felt so cold and numb. There was an excruciating pain in my stomach. My head hurt.

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 10/02/04                                                       Farah Hanif

I awoke with a sudden shiver. I felt so cold and numb. There was an excruciating pain in my stomach. My head hurt.

I stared at the dirty crumbling ceiling; I could smell a damp and vile odour causing me to wretch. The putrid smell made me realise I wasn’t at home in my warm cosy bed. I quickly turned my head to look around; my eyes flickered from side to side, trying to determine where I was. There was a metal cabinet beside my bed with a glass and jug of water on top, a large brown leather chair that was torn and an old dusty window, with a vase and fresh flowers.

   

Then it hit me I was in hospital. Why? Why was I here? What had happened? As all these questions were running through my head the pain became unbearable, I screamed out in agony. It felt like a hundred knives were stabbing through my stomach.

 A few minutes later Dr Sullivan, the local paediatrician arrived. I could see my mum from the corner of my eye. She looked weak and pale. Her thin face pressed against the window, her nose pushed onto the glass as she looked on.

Then all of a sudden I wasn’t at the hospital anymore I was at home, having an argument with my mum about not doing my chores. It didn’t make sense; it was like a daydream, as though I flicked through two different time zones. Reality and what seemed to be the past. I couldn’t quite work out was happening to me.

I felt someone tugging at my shoulder

“Jennifer, Jennifer honey,” said someone in a soft tone.

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   I awoke with a jerk to find my mum sat on the torn leather chair and my dad sat at the edge of my uncomfortable hospital bed.

   I lay there quietly not knowing what to say. I was completely mesmerised. Dad murmured something and then my parents had vanished. I tried to sit up but the pain forced me back down again. I felt a tall shadow towering over me. I looked up it was Doctor Sulivan. He gave me a quick glance and smiled.

   “Why am I here?” I asked anxiously

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