Independant Essay - Emma

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Laura Clark 10G

How is the character of Emma

presented by Austen in “Emma”, and what methods and techniques does

she use?

 

In “Emma”, Jane Austen uses a variety of methods and techniques to present the main character of Emma to the reader; mainly to change our opinion of her throughout the book. These subtle methods to affect the reader are apparent from even the first sentence:

 “Emma Woodhouse, handsome, clever, and rich, with a comfortable home and happy disposition, seemed to unite some of the best blessings of existence; and had lived nearly twenty-one years in the world with very little to distress or vex her.”

From the very beginning of the book, we are presented with a depiction of Emma, seeming to have the perfect life. Using an inflammatory first sentence affects the response of the reader towards Emma, a technique of using language that is used often throughout the novel by Austen. Immediately the reader is challenged by the author to dislike Emma; and has created a negative opinion of her from the beginning. Austen preys on basic human nature to get her desired response, as a reader will feel threatened or jealous by the description of perfection, as narrated in the opening few lines.

             The choice of words and phrases used in the sentence are key to giving the reader this particular response, for example “very little to distress or vex her.” These words seem to imply that nothing should have happened to Emma to cause her distress, which immediately ensures that the reader begins to find Emma annoying. This may also perhaps leads them to sense that she has led a very cushioned and protected life. This particular beginning might also imply that she is selfish, as it would seem she is worried about being “vexed” – something that is quite trivial, yet to her seems very important. Again, straight away the reader begins to dislike Emma, as we can see her flaws strongly, even in the opening paragraph.

        A strong technique Austen has used in presenting Emma is by giving her flaws in her personality, such as being patronising. She is shown to be spoiled; stubborn; judgemental and conceited at different points throughout the book. For the most part, this makes us dislike Emma as a person, but it also makes the reader like her as a character. This is because it makes the book more interesting to have a flawed main character (although we are made to believe she is perfect at the beginning of the book). Although the reader can clearly see Emma has imperfections, other characters in the book do not, or choose not to see them, and she is held as almost a role model in Highbury. Emma describes the people of Highbury as “nice but dim”. This description is the complete opposite of how Emma could be described, as she is quite unkind on occasion and is very quick-witted and clever. The reader becomes more and more aggravated at the people of Highbury as they continue to hold Emma in high esteem, and as a result of this, more aggravated at Emma, as she does not admit to having these faults, or ever being wrong.

        We can see an example of Emma’s stubbornness after she has an argument about Harriet with Mr Knightley. Both the reader and Emma realise that she is wrong (the narration tells us she feels very uncomfortable when arguing with Mr Knightley), yet in the narration we are told, “She did not repent what she had done.” As the narration is indirectly Emma’s thoughts, she therefore does not believe she was wrong to influence Harriet. We become annoyed at her; and the way that she refuses to acknowledge she might be wrong. Moments such as this in the book significantly influence what the reader thinks of Emma.  

Our opinion of Emma is formed somewhat by other characters that are present in the book; giving them particular qualities drastically influences how Emma is perceived by the reader. One particular character who has a large impact on the portrayal of Emma is Harriet, an orphan whom Emma befriends.

        As there is such a considerable margin between the two in terms of class and situation, Emma is observed to be acting very superior towards Harriet. This observation is made clearer as a result of how Harriet behaves towards Emma. As Emma comes from one of the most esteemed families in Highbury, Harriet persistently flatters and compliments Emma; agreeing with her whenever she is able. She feels that as Emma is wealthy and knowledgeable, she knows best and her word is always fact. As a result of these conditions, the reader is made to think throughout the book that Emma is always trying to be superior to Harriet.

An example of this is when Harriet says “How nicely you talk; I love to hear you.” This quote from Harriet illustrates the variation in their manner of speech and language; “I love to hear you” implies that Emma has a much more pleasant way of speaking. It also reiterates the difference in up-bringing that the pair have had. This becomes much more evident as the book goes on; with Emma constantly trying to bring Harriet up to above her given status place in life.  It is also quite a comic quote as the reader feels superior to Harriet – she tries so hard to stay on Emma’s good side that she resorts to complimenting her speech. The fact that she says she “loves to hear” Emma talk is also comic, as throughout the book it is quite noticeable that Emma talks quite a lot – perhaps more than any other character. It seems as if Harriet hasn’t been able to help but notice how Emma talks, as she hears her voice so often.

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Harriet influences the reader’s opinion of Emma, as we dislike how Emma handles her all the way through the book. An example of this is when Harriet is emotionally blackmailed by Emma into refusing Mr Martin, when the reader can visibly see that Harriet had not made up her mind. Emma’s apparent requirement for someone she can call her own is evident in the way she treats Harriet, sometimes as a little sister, sometimes as a servant, but on the whole as a pretty doll which she intends to manipulate how she pleases. Harriet submits to Emma’s bossiness with a ...

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