Is the opening to 'The Empty House' successful in engaging the reader in the story.

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Hannah Devlin

Mrs Clegg

English Coursework

An author can engage the reader in their stories by describing different aspects of the text in an interesting way. The narrator of a story is one way that can interest a reader by the knowledge and background they have or by the way they tell a story. The larger than life characters used in the text can be good ways to grab the reader’s attention by being thoroughly believable, allowing the reader to become attached to them or even, in the case of Sherlock Holmes, compete with them. Holmes, Watson and the characters within the stories are examples of these entertaining and realistic individuals.

        The settings and social context are important features for the appeal of a story to a reader. The vocabulary used is an important way in which the author can engage the reader, as the words need to be interesting and vivid for the person reading to be intrigued. Dull words that bore and do not create an interest for the reader are not useful in engaging the attention of the reader. The six short stories that I shall study during this essay are ‘The Empty House’, ‘The Final Problem’, ‘The Speckled Band’, ‘The Man With The Twisted Lip’, ‘Shoscombe Old Place’ and ‘The Red Headed League’. I shall analyse the opening paragraphs to discover the methods that Conan Doyle uses to engage the reader’s attention. During the analysis I will explore ideas such as vocabulary, plot and narrator of the stories.

        The narrator in all six of these detective stories is the character of Dr. James Watson. Watson makes an excellent choice as the narrator as he has an “intimate” relationship with the leading character, Sherlock Holmes. Being a close friend to Holmes and a partner in solving cases, it is Watson who knows most about him. This affects the reader as, if the person telling the story is somebody very knowledgeable on the subject being told, then it gives the reader the impression that they too shall know every detail of the life of such an interesting man. The mood of the narrator often sets the tone of the storyline to come. This suggests that Watson is very important to the storyline and that he feels deeply towards the cases he discusses. This is shown in the comparisons of ‘The Final Problem’ and  ‘The Empty House’. In ‘The Final Problem’ the narrator’s mood seems to be dismal and mournful. Watson speaks of writing the story as “with a heavy heart” suggesting that he is upset about an occurrence within the storyline, which encourages the reader to read on to find out about the cause of this sombre mood. In ‘The Empty House’ the tone has changed immensely. Watson narrates that the account of the event to come, is one of the “greatest shock and surprise of any event in my adventurous life”. This has an affect on the reader that if the story that he speaks of is to be the best thing that has happened to somebody who has had such an interesting life, then it must be entertaining. The words used by the narrator such as “thrilling” and “joy”, give the reader the impression that the story is of an elated context.

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        The fact that Watson is a doctor helps the reader to be convinced by what is said in these stories. In the stories it is reassuring to know that a doctor is telling the story as, especially in the Victorian era, they were thought to be very reliable people. Watson also speaks of himself as below Sherlock Holmes and often spent time “admiring” Holmes. The reader therefore is given the impression that, as Watson is a doctor, Holmes must be a great and intelligent and man to be of such a high status in Watson’s mind. As Watson is the ...

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