It was a cold, frosty Novembers morning and three friends were anticipating a breathtaking road trip. They were all undergraduates and desired a holiday before they start there first tortourous year of university!

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Mohammed Moneeb        English course work  Miss Hayre

Journeys End

It was a cold, frosty November’s morning and three friends were anticipating a breathtaking road trip. They were all undergraduates and desired a holiday before they start there first tortourous year of university! It was quarter-past eleven in the morning and the three of them were seeing their parents before they left, little did they know it was the last time they would ever see their parents!

They were all very close school friends, there were two boys and one girl, one of the boy’s names was Tom. He was a typical student who just wanted to relax all the time. He persuaded Fred to go, a hard working student who was going to go to university and there was Fred’s girlfriend, Rebecca. She was a young attractive teenager who loved thrills. They were all ready and prepared for the expedition of a lifetime; they were going to explore the whole of Britain in a car. They were looking forward to “chilling” before they went back to university, so they all agreed on a road trip; it seemed like the perfect holiday at the time........

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They set of at mid day and Tom was driving, they were on the motorway heading south on the M6. They stopped at the services for some food so they felt refreshed before they adventured on. Tom and Fred switched driving positions, it was approaching midnight and they were lost. Their satellite navigation system was not locking on. They were driving along a country lane and it was pitch black! Suddenly there was an abysmal, thundering explosion! They heard a part collapse from the car, the front two tyres disintegrated!  

Fred lost control of the car......it started to tumble ...

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