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“WE-HEY”, I shouted as I excitedly threw my bag into the boot of the car and quickly bent over to pick Donna’s bag up, “God Donna, what have you got in this? We’re only going for two days”. “Yes well its cold out there, I don’t want to freeze! So I bought plenty of warm clothing”, snapped Donna.

Steph quickly butted in, “look let’s not argue, we haven’t even got down the road and you two are already at each other’s throats”. “Yes just think of all the fun we are going to have” said John, winking at me I gave an embarrassed smile and got in the car with Steph, Donna, John, Andy and Steven.

“It’s a good job work let me borrow this Ford Galaxy otherwise you all wouldn’t fit in my rubbish little Escort, what with all Donna’s luggage” laughed Steph’s mum. “Stop picking on me, I came prepared” Donna retorted. Steph let out a little giggle, which Donna turned her nose up at she then looked down to admire her freshly painted nails.

Ste and Andy didn’t seem to say very much until Steph persisted in playing, what’s that smell? “Steven’s feet, no let me guess, ive got it now Andy” shouted Steph. At that point after everybody had stopped laughing, John said, “Oh god, how long now, I’m well bored, put the radio on”. “Not long now” replied Sue (Steph’s mum).                                                                                                                                                  

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Finally we had reached our destination, without anybody getting travelsick. “Let me out, let me out, I cant stand this car anymore let me out” screamed Donna, “It stinks in there who had beans for tea?” joked Steven but nobody seemed to be listening. John and Andy had run off into the bush, to, well-let mother-nature take its course. Donna and Steph were already moaning about how cold it was. I didn’t care, here I was, no parents, surrounded by no one else but my five best friends and nothing but miles of trees.

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