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Miriam. She lay their bloated, decaying. Her worrying over, no more problems.

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Miriam By Alex Mazzoleni 10SA She lay their bloated, decaying. Her worrying over, no more problems. It was only two months before; Miriam was sat at the banquet table consuming the sumptuous food when her younger brother Amish limped into the dilapidated banquet hall "all right sis" he begrudgingly mumbled. "Oh hello my dear brother," replied Miriam "would you like some turnips or chicken its very good you know and..." "Shut up I'm fine," bellowed Amish Every one in the hall gasped. Miriam was flabbergasted at her brother's rudeness. Miriam was the Queen of France. She was twenty-nine years old, tall, and extremely ugly. Amish was her younger brother, at twenty-eight years old but exceptionally jealous of Miriam as she was the heir to the throne. ...read more.

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That night he called a meeting with the knights and told them his plan, "right listen up" shouted Amish "when goody two shoes Miriam goes picking her stupid flowers I'm going to make her wish she'd never been Queen, are you lazy good for nothing knights going to help me?" "Were busy...um...um... training, yes that's it!" stated the chief knight. Unknown to Amish the knights loathed him and told Miriam. "He's going to kill you he is!" revealed one Knight "You wanna be careful you do!" told another "Oh well thank you boys I'll bear that in mind?" replied Miriam with a puzzled look on her face. She had suspicions that the guards were round the bend but this had made her mind up. ...read more.

Conclusion

He picked her lame, limp body from the grass and with big heave he hurled her into pond. Amish casually walked back to the castle pretending nothing had happened. Meanwhile Miriam lay their bloated, decaying. Her worrying over and no more problems. As time passed people started to become suspicious and saying things like "where's Miriam, I haven't seen her in ages." The guards became even more suspicious and remembered the things Amish had said about making her wish she'd never been queen. Amish slipped out from the castle in the dead of night in search of the body. He could hear screams also the distinctive hoot of owls and the howling of dogs in the distance brought all sorts of images into his mind. He got to the pond...looked...and looked again...but there was no sign Miriam's body anywhere. ...read more.

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