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Montazah. As I scrambled over the imposing, maze-like rocks and boulders, I felt exhilarated, as I hadnt done for months; the very exertion of clambering over them filled me with an inexplicable feeling

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Introduction

Montazah Fresh sea spray with a salty zing. A fusion of brine and moist greenery. Blasts of cool, bracing wind, recently washed by the changing tide. This was a different world from the dirty, bustling streets, which I was so used to. This was Montazah. As I scrambled over the imposing, maze-like rocks and boulders, I felt exhilarated, as I hadn't done for months; the very exertion of clambering over them filled me with an inexplicable feeling. The rocks themselves were hard, metallic grey and perilously slippery, algae glistening in its many shades of green, and resembling a huge jigsaw whose pieces didn't fit together properly. From below, the crests of the jagged peaks were drawn against the sky, as though a small child had scribbled viciously across a page of baby blue. Beyond their summit, the spectacular, mesmerising view of the endless Mediterranean unfolded before me. The horizon stretched limitlessly. It was like nothing I'd ever seen before. ...read more.

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Grabbing my swimming gear, I picked my way down the weathered shingle, which gradually formed into soft sand that coated my feet. I soon came to a small, private area enclosed like a lagoon; a sheltered world away from the rocks. Apprehensively, I slipped my toes into the clear blue water but withdrew them quickly; I was already shivering. When my body had adjusted to the extreme temperature of the icy water, I began to swim. No, not swim, struggle. Struggle against the strong current and the waves. Nevertheless, I savoured the invigorating labour. Once, I felt myself in the invisible grasp of the water, but managed to crawl to the shore and sat spluttering and coughing up the briny wetness. I felt sorry for myself. Looking like a bedraggled specimen and shivering uncontrollably, my hands and feet were almost blue and my skin, especially my lips, had all but shrivelled up. I threw on my clothes as fast as I could and donned a thick jumper to shield myself from the elements. ...read more.

Conclusion

Dragonflies zipped around like electric blue streaks on the wind. Ruby- and amethyst-like blooms glinted, nestled within velvet green; their perfume drifted on the breeze, sharpening my senses. The forested areas were secretly alive, I heard creatures scurrying somewhere above me. There was a sleepy silence here, punctuated only by the rustlings of busy animals. Old leaves crunched beneath my feet as I walked and the crackle of twigs was sharp in my ears. Here and there quivering spots of gold found their way to the forest floor, filtering through the trees. The thick grass bounced back up behind me and its dewy smell filled the air. Vibrant butterflies floated around clusters of flowers and bushes, opening and closing their wings with such rapidity that it looked as though the air was full of flickering rainbows. There was a pure simplicity in the breathtaking beauty of Montazah. I wanted to stay in this forgotten corner forever. 871 words ?? ?? ?? ?? Samah Siddiqui 10G 01/10/07 Descriptive writing coursework: final copy ...read more.

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