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        The hard frost hung in the slanted canopy of the evergreen tree, an ice sculpture as perfectly pristine as the whitest, gleaming diamond. The weight made it creak in the arctic air. Below it in the pond, frozen, steaming in the red polar sun, a single carp lay below the powdered surface dying for a way out.

        John stood admiring the breathless beauty. Each of the breaths he took formed a plume of frozen matter which, after a brief drift, caught the rays of the sunset and settled upon the crisp, iced grass. Lighting the cigarette he had rolled inside, he drew a puff deep into his ice burned throat. He sat on the bench with nothing but his cigarette and the vast expanse of unbearable isolation and pristine stillness for company.

        He exhaled the smoke, replacing it with a surge of super cooled air, willing it to banish him from the cancer that was plaguing his deteriorated body.

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        The house was fifty yards from his bench, though masked by the mist, the cold haze deprived a descent view, but the farm, caldecotes, was as he had admitted-as good a place as to die as any.

        Inside the Victorian building the lights, that were on (of which there were not many) shone long into the now dusking sky. Breathing to clear the condensed pain, the dull primary colours of the blazing fire warmed the very cockles of his stone-cold heart.

        Walking along the path, the squeak of the gate bought a nausea to his minds eye, of wishing he ...

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