Oridinal writing - "Dad how long before we get home?" I asked.

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“Nelson” ………… “New York” ……….. “Nairobi”

My brothers and I had been going on for ages, we were naming cities beginning with different letters, we had already done footballers and cricketers, we had even tried family members but after number 153.5 (our cousin was pregnant) it just was not fun. Being bored and having nothing to do can make you do very courageous or as in this case very stupid things.

“Dad how long before we get home?” I asked.

Big mistake, never interrupt my dad during a conversation especially when he is talking politics.

Now that I had asked the question and realised my mistake I was expecting an answer but I got something much worse, SCILENCE.

You would think I had learnt my lesson but no I asked him again “Dad how long left?”  

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 “Shazib SHUT UP” My dad cried back.

I had finally learnt my lesson and I did as I was told. I continued to amuse myself the best I could and my brothers and I tried to synchronise their watches with the car clock.

After this a bit of the event is blurry, my brother later told me that the driver of the truck in front of us had slowed down, my dad had tried to slow down but it was too late we had caught the rear side of the truck (this is where I start ...

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