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Sachyn Patel 10sw

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Tense moment in sport

320-6: an exceptional score on a crumbling pitch. “How will the Indians catch up?” the commentator bellows. He is shouting so vigorously that it would frighten little children. The fans nervously wait for the Indian performers to take the stage and win the pride of their country. They have the honour of batting in the final of this thrilling 100th anniversary World Cup. The Indians are a fantastic team. They have beaten the best, apart from one, South Africa!

Millions of fans fill the stadium, with many watching on their television sets. Each anticipating the final two balls to occur. The crowds are going wild and cheering their favourite team, they are like wild and dangerous animals. Roaring to install fear into their enemies and victims.

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Another fantastic thing was the magnificent array of wonderful, colourful clothes worn by the crowd. All the colours seen together are like a bright, shiny rainbow, and like a woman wearing a bright colourful dress. It matches the noisy atmosphere of the crowd.

The first delivery is about to occur, the batsmen is cautious, like a goalkeeper waiting to save a penalty. The crowd is completely mute. You cannot hear a sound, except for the nervous breathing of the batsman, as the first delivery is about to be bowled. The bowler is under a lot of pressure to ...

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