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Introduction

No! I just can't take it anymore. The violence and ingratitude shown towards us was too much to handle. Me and mother. We were drawn back into a world of darkness and hate, because of him. He never quite understood what it were like to be us. He always thought of us as submissive and pariahs like everyone else. Except we weren't "everyone else", we were his own. My father. "And where do you think you're going?" ...read more.

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I didn't even have to wait for him to do it personally. I walked up the stairs increasing in height by the second, too bad my life wasn't though; it was on its way right down. I don't remember much after that. All I can recall was the black war hole of darkness I was plunging right towards. I remember mothers aching screams, feeling so guilty and helpless, what was I to do? I knew I was next. ...read more.

Conclusion

I couldn't bare to look anymore, surely this was the end of the road. His blood red eyes were edging closer and closer. As he raised the knife into the air, I held mothers hand and prayed to god. There was a thud! As the bloody knife fell to the ground, and a scream, mothers scream. I opened my eyes slowly at pace. I looked down at mother's bloodstained hands and felt tears come out of my eyes. I glared from above to the lifeless body by my feet. That once was the bastard father. ...read more.

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