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Short Story By Rupert Pemberton It was a hot summers day and Dave and Steven were planning to go back to Steven's house after school to stay the night and go out on Saturday. Everyone in the whole school was extremely excited because it was the last day of term and were all planning their summer holiday. School was going to end at noon and there were no lessons, they just needed to collect their reports and see who had won prizes for their efforts. When school ended Dave and Steven left and walked to the train station to get back to his house. Steven said, " How much money have you got?" Dave said " About twenty pounds." Steven said, " Should be enough." They walked a bit faster otherwise they would miss the train. There were people from their school going by train. Dave said quickly " I just need a can of coke." Steven said, " Don't be long." Dave went into the newsagent and the man at the counter didn't take his eyes off him. Dave bought the coke and let the man keep the change. When he came Steven shouted " Hurry we're going to miss it." They ran and just got on the train. They saw some of their friends from sitting about 5 metres away and walked over to sit with them. Steven said " Hi you lot. Where are you going?" James said, " We're going to the cinema." They both sat down. No one said anything for the rest of the journey. They both go off when it was their stop. Started to walk back to Steven's house. Dave said while walking " Have you got any good games for your playstation 2." Steven said " Yeah I've got loads." ...read more.

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They both sprayed BB's at them. They six boys got hit quite a few times a retaliated. Steven and Dave crouched down. Dave shouted, " I'm hit. You didn't say it hurt this much." Steven got and looked out of the window. They boys were running towards the building and were very close. Come let's get to the stairs before the boys can get up here." They ran towards stairs and stayed there. Just as they got there a boy ran up the stairs. Steven aimed at him and pulled the trigger but nothing happened, both the pistols were empty. The boy aimed was just about to shoot when Dave shot a spray of BB's hitting him in the chest. The boy ran back down in pain. Steven started to reload his pistols when a voice came from down stair saying, " You're out numbered so come down and we won't hurt you." Steven said " No way." The voice shouted " Right we're coming up there to get you then." But they didn't come up the stairs. Then voice shouted, " Ok we'll give thirty seconds to decide if you're going come down or we'll throw a petrol bomb on the stairs and burn to death." Dave whisper " So come on lets go down then." Steven whispered, " You must be stupid. If we go down they'll shoot us all over coving us with bruises and our money and ours mobile so we'll stay up here." Then the voice shouted, " Your thirty seconds are up bye." Suddenly a bottle went flying and smashed on the stairs. The fire quite big and the whole stairs were covered in flames. ...read more.

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When they got inside Dave dropped the gun and said " I'm so glad I that out. Do you know how heavy that gun is? I don't see the point in bring them. Steven said, " If we hadn't of brought those guns those two would have taken all our money and our mobiles." Steven put the guns under the bed. Then he said, " Do you want DVD or something?" Just as Dave was about to answer Steven's Mum shouted " It's time for dinner." They both ran down and sat at the table. It was roast chicken with roast potato. Steven got and went the fridge to get a coke. Just as he was doing that he said " So when Dad getting back. His Mum said " Not for a few days." Then Steven said " Dave do you want a glass of coke?" Dave said, " Err yes please." Steven poured it. Then came and sat down at the table. They all started eating away. Steven's Mum said, " So what did you get up to today? You home quite late." Steven said " We to that abandoned mental home. There was nothing much there. But we lost and it took ages to find our way out." Then she said, " Dave you're very quiet." Steven said in a mocking voice " That's cause he's shy." They both kept eating the food and within a few minutes it was gone. They both the table and went up to Steven's room. Then Steven said, " Lets go on the Internet." They switched the computer on and connected up. Dave said, " So what are we going to go on. Steven said, " I just need check my email. He signed in to his email address but it was only junk mail. They both decided it had been quite a day and Dave soon left. ...read more.

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