Strangers on a train

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Bridget Emanuel

Strangers on a train

Big Ben had just struck midnight when Helen and her friends joyfully burst through the doors of the Westminster Academy.

  ‘What an amazing concert’, she cried.

‘We should definitely go and watch another one soon!’ replied Tom.

   ‘Guys, I think we should just forget about the concert for one split second and actually

think about our journey home at such a ridiculous hour!’ said Sarah.

‘True, look I’ll go with you Helen and Jim, you go with Sarah’ said Tom.

   As the couple waited anxiously for the last train to approach, they silently reminisced over what had really been a well and truly, unforgettable night.

   After a long wait of what felt like an hour, the last train clumsily slid along the rail tracks and hesitantly pulled up to a halt at Westminster station. Its rickety doors, lethargically slid open and wickedly beckoned the two friends into its carriage of mystery.

As Helen looked directly in front of her to look through the pane of glass on the other side of the carriage, she caught a glimpse of a strange looking girl sitting in between two puny but psychotic looking boys. Helen always felt uncomfortable making any form of eye contact with strangers as she had heard of various incidents concerning people in the same situation as her. However, it was as if some strong wave of curiosity was encouraging her face to keep on studying these characters and as she did this, she noticed the vibrant blue veins ridged into the girl’s skin and the trembling hands of the boys. All through this, the girl stayed unmoving.

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‘Tom look over to the other side but try to make it as discreet as possible’, Helen said to her friend.

‘You mean that dodgy looking bunch opposite us yeah?’ he replied.

    ‘Yeah, they’re really starting to creep me out; please do something!’

‘Ok,right I’ve got a plan.’ he said, ‘Now, Helen listen to me very carefully, when I get off at my stop, come with me and pretend that it’s also your stop and just try and cleverly change carriages ok?’

  When the train ground to a halt at Paddington station, the two got off and ...

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