The Dolls In The loft

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Laura McIntyre

The Dolls In The loft

    The door lay open. The shadow drew closer. Amy could see something or someone lurking by the old abandoned rocking horse. She could see the rocking horse moving slightly from side to side, but she was not sure if it was a draught or just her imagination.

    Amy had been babysitting her cousin one night when she heard noises coming from the loft. At first she was too scared to go and see what it was, but after a while the noise started to become unbearable. It sounded as if there was a meeting going on in the loft because every five minutes she was disturbed by what sounded like the screeching of chairs, but Amy knew that there were no chairs up the loft as she was always going up there as a child. She used to make a castle out of all the boxes and then she would sit and play in it with her dolls. Amy now wished that she had a castle made out of boxes to hide in, to get away from whatever was up the loft.

    Amy was sitting in the living room, watching the television, when she heard another noise, so she put the volume of the television up louder so she could not hear the noise, but it just seemed to get louder too. It was as if Amy was controlling the noise from the remote control, so she decided to mute the television which seemed to make it stop. She thought that if she could not hear the noise she would not be as scared to go and have a look.

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    She crept up the stairs which were leading to the loft as gently and as quietly as she could, but when she reached the top of the stairs Amy could hear her heart beat getting faster and faster. Reaching out for the door handle was the most terrifying thing she had ever done in her life. Her heart was beating faster every second. Amy eventually managed to pluck up the courage to just grab the handle and open the door, but after she had opened the door she stood in the doorway for about five minutes, too scared ...

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