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The killer in the back seat!!!!! Anne was driving on narrow deserted country road without any front lights; she was only 20 years of age, with long black hair, blue eyes and no other family that she knew of. It was a cold, gloomy and dark night; Anne could sense the danger waiting for her just around the corner. As she went further down the narrow deserted road, dark clouds appeared quickly over her head and it became almost impossible to drive. Her heartbeat started to go up, so she increased her speed from 30 to 40mph. She wondered if things could get any worse than this. Suddenly, the rain started tipping down and it blocked the little vision she had left to concentrate on the road with. Anne could hear the hungry wolf prowling menacingly for food, at the same time the noise of the thunder made Anne jump every time it struck. However, she was pleased to be safe in her car, not worrying about the fact that she was driving without any lights and that none of the locks were working on all four doors. ...read more.


She hoped that they could catch him and felt sorry for the people who were outside. She shuddered, drove the car faster and was pleased to be in her car safe and well. The narrow road got narrower and narrower as she drove along the deserted road. The car started making all sorts of noise and the speed of the car decreased rapidly. She began to worry because she was in the middle of nowhere and her car had broken down. She pulled over to see what the problem could be, but out of the blue a small light appeared on the other side of the road and she began to walk over towards it, shivering and scared. When she got close to the light, it turned out to be a garage. She was happy on the outside but shaking on the inside because it was a spooky and creepy garage and a black dark shadow was getting closer and closer to Anne. Her hands and legs started to shiver rapidly because Anne thought he was the killer who just escaped from the prison. ...read more.


He tried to pull her away as far as he could from the car, but she wouldn't stay still. He was trying to tell her something. Anne thought he was going to kill her. As they moved away from the car, the man let Anne go. She hit the man and he dropped to the ground unconscious. She was in shock. She didn't know what to do,(Be clear & logical) firstly she checked to see if there was enough fuel in the car for her to escape but her tank was empty. Anne could see the man getting up; she filled her tank up as quickly as she could and sat in her car, she was happy to be in her car. She saw the man running towards her car through her inside mirror but she started the car and drove away, she could her man pointing at the bonnet and shouting something but she does not care. She is saying to herself that she is a life e and well and she wants to get as far away from this place as possible. The man was actually warning her about the escaped prisoner who was hiding in her back seat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...read more.

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