Twisted Desire

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Twisted Desire

 Jennifer Stanton, she sat in her chemistry lesson twisting her long blonde hair round her fingers staring with her deep blue eyes at Brad Holmes the captain of the football team, she was very pretty, and she knew Brad liked her it’s just the problem of her over-protective parents that made him keep away. At 17 you wouldn’t think she’d have a problem?

Emily and Richard Stanton did not like to appear overprotective they just liked to give Jennifer a bit of discipline, as she never seemed to take any notice of them, they were kind at heart but they never really trusted Jennifer.

Jennifer confided in her best friend Karren Evans, she would tell Karren everything,

“Hi Jen,” said Karren “are you coming to the party tonight?”

“No” replied Jennifer “my parents won’t let me and I haven’t got a date anyway!”

Karren had an idea “You can tell your parents your staying the night at my house!”

“Really Karren, thanks but theirs still the problem of a date?”

“Don’t worry Jakes got this friend Nick, I’m sure he’d come!”

“Ok thanks you’re a real mate!”

Jennifer went home and collected her things for the party and her Mom dropped her off at Karren’s House.

Jennifer’s Mom knew she was going to a party because of the way she was dressed, she just didn’t want Richard her husband to find out, as he thinks that Jennifer isn’t old enough, and he doesn’t like her mixing with boys?

Jennifer got to Karren’s house and met Nick!

“Hi, I’m Nick you must be Jennifer, I’ve heard so much about you,”

“Shall we go suggested Jennifer” Jennifer was very anxious it was a long time since she’d been to a party!

Jennifer and Nick seemed to get on very well,

Brad was at the party he was with a girl called Emma, Jennifer seemed a little Jealous. She then went to the Bathroom...

Meanwhile at Jennifer’s house, Jennifer’s Dad walked in with a large book.

“What have you got their Richard?” questioned Emily Jennifer’s Mom,

“An old college text I used to revise from, I wonder if Jennifer would be interested!”

Richard started to dial Karren’s house number into his phone, Emily tried to stop him, “Don’t Richard” she said anxiously “tell her tomorrow!”

“No, I’ll tell her now, she’d want to know, it might help her with her studies!”

Karren’s Mom answered the phone,

“Hello Richard Stanton here can I speak to my daughter?”

As Karren’s Mom didn’t know that Jennifer was lying to her Parents, she told Richard that Jennifer was at the party.

“Sorry, she’s gone to the party!”

Party, what party?” He says calmly

He whispers to Emily “She’s gone to a party!”

“Its at Dry Hill Football Club!” replied Mrs Evans.

“Yeah thanks, I know where that is, it must have slipped my mind. Bye!”

Join now!

Mr Stanton picked up his car keys and got in his car, Emily shouted “Let her have some fun for once,”

But it didn’t seem to work.

 .... Jennifer stepped out of the bathroom Brad was there!

“Hi Jen” said Brad

“Oh sorry, I didn’t realise anyone wanted to use the bathroom”

“No I wanted to talk to you”....

Mr Stanton was approaching the steps of the football club he made his authority known by switching the music off.

He saw Jennifer. She was talking to a boy!

....“Brad your with Emma”

“And your with” Brad was curious and ...

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