What makes 'The Turn of the Screw' such a successful short story?

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What makes ‘The Turn of the Screw’

 such a successful short story?

"The Turn of the Screw" was written by the renowned American author Henry James during the 1890's. James had recently been through an extremely unsuccessful patch, finding it difficult to sell his lengthy, wordy novels and enduring the shame of having one of his plays booed off stage, therefore, his motivation for writing the novella was mainly mercenary. When James decided to take action, he immediately turned to his notebook for inspiration 'in search of something that might tickle the public's jaded taste'. It was here that he found a source for the tale: Archbishop Benson's anecdote about a pair of sinful servants, a man and a woman, who had corrupted two children in their care, and then returned from the dead to claim their souls. 'The Turn of the Screw' draws many other parallels with the anecdote including the setting (a country house) and how the phantoms appear: beckoning to the children from the battlements and across water. 'The, Turn of the Screw' was published at a time when 'spiritual issues' concerning death and the afterlife were becoming increasingly popular and when Gothic, supernatural stories were in demand. Considering this, it is not surprising that James decided to cover these genres. The novella-length tale was first published as a series of 12 instalments in the magazine Collier's Weekly, between the months of January and April in 1898. Its modern day equivalent would most likely be a serialised drama on television. When we consider James’ difficulty in writing briefly, we can see that these weekly instalments were an ideal solution to his problem; James could maintain his complex writing style without compromising the reader’s attention, therefore making Turn of the Screw far more digestible. The public's response to James' creation made it clear that 'The Turn of the Screw' was hitting all the right notes and its success was immediate with James receiving “a large postbag of complimentary letters from friends and strangers alike”.

The largest portion of 'The Turn of the Screw' comprises the supposedly autobiographical account of a young woman’s experience as she accepts the position of governess to two orphan children at a large country house in Essex. The timid 20 year old daughter of a "poor country parson" comes up to London to answer an advertisement to be governess to two young children. During her interview, the impressionable young woman believes she has fallen deeply in love with her potential employer: a "handsome, bold and pleasant" gentleman who is Uncle and guardian to the two young orphans. Despite the fact she has had absolutely no previous experience, the Uncle offers her the position, completely entrusting her with the upkeep and welfare of the house and children. The governess, flattered by the absolute trust placed in her, accepts the position at Bly despite the peculiar condition attached to it; “that she should never trouble him – but never, never: neither appeal nor complain nor write about anything”. The Governess’ infatuation with her employer causes her to become fiercely determined to comply with this request, regardless of the stress that it could cause the “anxious” and “fluttered” youth. At one point she proclaims “no one knew how proud I had been to serve him and to stick to our terms”. Even when faced with strange and disturbing occurrences, her resolve remains intact. She battles through supposed visitations from the dead, the threat of corruption of her young charges, and the expulsion of Miles from his public school without so much as a word to him. It is only when Flora becomes severely ill that she feels justified in requesting his assistance.

James uses the setting to reinforce the Gothic aspect of the tale, using buildings to reflect this motif. The house at which the Governess assumes her duties is a large manor in the Essex countryside. This “castle of romance” which the Governess claims could “take all the colour out of storybooks and fairytales”, has a real mysterious, “antique” aura, and is an ideal setting for a ghost story.

The success of ‘The Turn of the Screw’ lies in its multiplicity of interpretation, therefore, in order to make ‘The Turn of the Screw’ a successful short story, it is necessary for James to incorporate several genres in order to achieve this ambiguous effect. If we take ‘The turn of the Screw’ purely on face value it is clearly a supernatural tale. This is apparent as the main storyline is based on the idea of visitations from beyond the grave. Strongly linked to the supernatural theme is the horror element, which is made manifest through the idea of corruption of the innocent and the apparent ghosts’ supposedly malicious intentions.  There are also Gothic undertones to the tale, which are clearly identifiable through the emphasis on old mysterious buildings, the recurring religious symbolism, and the frequent use of pathetic fallacy. Finally, clever characterisation is used to introduce the psychological aspect of the tale. Under a post-Freudian reading James’ masterfully woven description of the Governess, her background and behaviour can infer that she is neurotic and delusional, and that the supposed visitations are merely the result of stress and an over active imagination.

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The structure of ‘The Turn of The Screw’ is particularly unusual as we are given a story within a story within a story! The tale begins with an anonymous narrator recounting his experience of a Christmas Eve that he spent with a group of acquaintances in an old house. He recollects the group sharing “strange” tales with each other, and speaks of one that he found particularly chilling. The narrator of this tale is a character named Douglas. Douglas procures the handwritten memoirs of a deceased woman that he used to know, and who he was once in love ...

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