Childhood Obesity-A Rising Issue GCSE Health and Social Care
besity is an ever more concerning issue affecting the particularly vulnerable children and pre-adults who still have to live off their parents as they have no choice. They eat what their parents give them; they refuse what their parents give them. And this giving and taking particularly is the leading cause of, thanks to the mothers and fathers, of childhood obesity. Childhood obesity affects children from a very early age and, obesity, can stay trapped within them for a very long time. It is not so much the child’s fault for their large, unnatural structure (although they can certainly contribute), it is more to the fact that their parents feeding their children well beyond their GDA’s, to the grave, because of various health factors, such as heart disease and type two diabetes.
Type 1 diabetes is caused naturally when someone is being created in the mother’s womb; it is automatically built into the child’s DNA at fertilization. It is un-preventable. If it going to happen, there is virtually nothing you can do to prevent it. Even though, a person can appear to look fit, they still can have Type 2 diabetes.
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