It Was a Hot Sunny Day In the Small Tribal Village of Kushiki

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Year 10 Creative Writing

It was a hot sunny day in the small tribal village of kushiki when all of a sudden there was a loud bang coming from the butchers which was owned by an old man called Zenial, it was a heard all around the village. As soon as the dust had settled a circle had been formed around the wreckage which was once the local butchers.  Then a small figure pushed his way through the crowd. It was the king Tombah. When he got to the front, he started to pull the rubble away. He was obviously looking for something the crowd started to talk amongst themselves, just then he stood up and shouted “AH HA!” I knew it. He lifted up a small piece of metal above his head. “A lead bomb” he shrieked. “Someone has planted this here”. “Find Zenial” he whispered to Shahalia his son and guardian

“He ‘s out in the forest” Shahalia replied

“Go to the forest and bring him to me”.

It was mid afternoon by the time Shahlia returned in the Kings hut

“Here he is farther” said Shahlia

“Thank you son” the king replied “You may go now”. “Come here Zenial” the king pleaded

“Yes your majesty” Zenial replied

“I’m afraid I have some bad news the king began “your shop has become the victim of a heinous crime, a lead bomb was planted in your shop”.

“What? Why? What will I do now? I’ve been building that business up for years” Zenial whined

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“I’m very sorry, I will be holding a personal investigation into this crime”

“Please find the culprit, my lord” Zenial begged

“Don’t worry. I’ll put my best men on the case, I promise I will catch who ever did this” Said Tombah.

2 YEARS LATER

“ I’m ready for my Royal bath now,” Tombah said

“Very well your highness” replied Kakina the Royal servant

Just then Lipetel the Queen burst into the room “What is it my love?” asked Tombah

“Zenial is (there was a long pause) is dead” she wept, she began to ...

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