A party of three explorers start their brutal expedition into the blazing, raw and unyielding arctic, a forbidden layer of ice, rock, and snow.

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A party of three explorers start their brutal expedition into the blazing, raw and unyielding arctic, a forbidden layer of ice, rock, and snow.  As the night died down the explorers camped out for the night.

Two of the explorers were brothers, Cavdazer, and Edwin Dingle, Cavdazer is vast in size, his hands could wrap around your face like an octopus grabbing you and sucking out your life.  Whereas, Edwin is short and skinny.   Drew the other explorer is Cavdazer’s childhood friend; she is tall and very astute.

Darkness falls, “go and scope out the area Ed, while Drew and I put up the tent” said Cavdazer “you better hurry up because it’s getting dark”.

“Hey Cavdazer the tent is nearly up, but where is Edwin”

“You know what, I hope he comes back soon” said Cavdazer sharply.  Edwin strolls about a quarter mile west on the thick layer of snow and ice he suddenly hears growling, “who’s there?” Edwin shouted with fright, but there was no answer, Edwin continued, with caution, observing every little movement around him, Edwin fled with terror and approached a cliff unknown to him, he continued moving closer and closer.  Again Edwin hears growling “CAVDAZER!” Edwin shouted with dismay, he took out his ice hammer and hook and held them close, now walking with fear, Edwin is now less than a metre away from a 500ft plunge not realising, Edwin slips, and falls, crashing down to sudden death.

“I’m getting worried Cavdazer” said Drew anxiously,

“So am I, I think we better go and find him, no need to worry, Edwin always messes about, hiding in some cave or something you know Ed, the old fool” Said Cavdazer with a big smirk on his face.

“I hope you are right,” said Drew with concern.

Cavdazer and Drew set off almost immediately after Edwin, “We will follow Edwin’s tracks, we will try and find him, he couldn’t have gone far” said Cavdazer,

Cavdazer and Drew approach the cliff at approximately 18:19; the footprints disappeared as snow continued to fall.  “Which way now” said Drew,

“Let’s walk a little further, ok,” said Cavdazer with warmth.  They both approached the cliff, “can you see anything?” said Cavdazer,

“Apart from the 500ft drop, nothing” said Drew sarcastically,

“EDWIN!, EDWIN!” screamed Cavdazer, no answer!  “Lets carry on”,

“WAIT, can you hear something?” said Drew,

“I can’t hear anything, you must be hearing things!” smirked Cavdazer,

“EDWIN, EDWIN is that you?” Called Drew, both Drew and Cavdazer stood still trying not to make a sound,

“CAVDAZER        !” a faint sound coming from the end of the cliff, “HELP”

“EDWIN is that you,” shouted Cavdazer

“CAVDAZER, HELP ME” another yell came from the cliffs.  Cavdazer looked over the cliff and to his amazement, Edwin was hanging on by the ice hammer, his left arm was broken and Edwin was hanging onto the depths of life, with one hand.  “HANG IN THERE, I’M COMING” Shouted Cavdazer, “Drew! Pass me the rope, tie the rope behind that rock and hold onto it tightly, whatever you do, DON’T LET GO!” shouted Cavdazer,

“You got it, be careful, Edwin we’re coming, hold on!” called Drew, Cavdazer approached the edge of the cliff with caution, and slowly climbed down the rope, “pass me your hand!” shouted Cavdazer, he was running on pure adrenaline.

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“You are too far!” shouted Edwin, Cavdazer lowers himself and grabs Edwin with one hand, Cavdazer pulls Edwin up the rope, the pressure increases, it’s becoming too heavy, the rope slips out of Drew's hand and slides off the rock.  The rope swings towards the edge of the cliff, “HELP DREW! GRAB THE ROPE!” shouted Edwin.  Drew ran towards the rope like a cheetah running after it’s prey, Drew grabbed hold of the rope and pulled as hard as she could, but the weight was too much.  The edge was coming closer rapidly, Drew kept on pulling, by this time ...

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