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Should abortion be allowed at 24 weeks?

In this report I am going to display facts on abortion time limits, whether it should stay at 24 weeks be reduced or increased. By doing this not only have I gained further knowledge but I have come to a decision on this topic and what I feel is right.             In today’s generation Abortion has reached above boundary and has increased over the past few years rapidly, however do you think Mothers going through pain and killing another life form is right or wrong?  Or do you believe that that terminating pregnancy in the given time limit is correct as the baby has not really developed and is not a human yet?

Many believe that abortion time limits should be reduced as it is stated at about 24 weeks the foetus is perfectly developed and moves. Professor sunny Anand from the university of Arkansas said that a foetus aborted at 20 weeks can feel “excruciating pain” (Mail online  by Nigel Morris) which many people say is unfair as the child who has no say and as it is, is already being removed from this world, know also has to suffer deep pain. Additionally Former conservative minister who demanded for a 12 week limit in abortion told fellow MP’s “we believe an unborn child of 12 weeks has undeniable human characteristics her organs, her muscles, her nerves have begun to function. She has fingernails and toenails she needs nothing more than a few months to stay in the safety of her mothers womb for her to become a child” Conservative minister wishes to reduce the time to about 12 weeks but many think it is too much and would think about 20 weeks would be sufficient as you may see in the table below. (Wikipedia)

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Even so Many people suggest that abortion should be kept at a 24 week limit there are many explanations to this and to keep my report reasonable from both aspects here are a few: ( Tory MP  changed in own words)

  1. Women should not be pushed in to having an abortion before they make there decision. A reduction in time may force women who are stuck between whether to keep there pregnancy or making a choice to definitely terminate it before even thinking it through clearly.
  2.  Many women may fail to realise ...

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Minor grammatical errors in places, and some of their sentences are very awkwardly worded. Spelling, punctuation, and grammar otherwise fine. Format is clear and easy to read.

The introduction is set out well and studies the ethical questions which surround this debate. They first outline well the different arguments for the differences in week numbers well, providing statistics on the UK response to such questions which supports their data. Their arguments for the 24 week line are well done, although some of their arguments require more support for them to be better understood and valid. They provide good arguments as to why the time should be reduced to 20 weeks old. Their conclusion is adequate but they need to make it more rounded to consider the aspects of 24 weeks a little more, before formulating their own strong moral opinions.

Response to the question is done well. The candidate considers both sides of the argument and provides evidence of quite a bit of research. To improve they should develop their viewpoints and conclusions and research the data a bit more in depth with the scientific theories.