Dulce Et Decorum Est Annotation

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  1. Bent double, like old beggars under sacks,
  2. Knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we cursed through sludge,
  3. Till on the haunting flares we turned our backs
  4. And towards our distant rest began to trudge.
  5. Men marched asleep. Many had lost their boots 
  6. But limped on, blood-shod. All went lame; all blind;
  7. Drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots 
  8. Of tired, outstripped Five-Nines that dropped behind.

  1. Gas! Gas! Quick, boys!  An ecstasy of fumbling, (11 syllables, stress the last word)
  2. Fitting the clumsy helmets just in time;
  3. But someone still was yelling out and stumbling, (11 syllables, stresses last word)
  4. And flound'ring like a man in fire or lime . . .
  5. Dim, through the misty panes and thick green light,
  6. As under a green sea, I saw him drowning.  (11 syllables stresses last word)
  7. (incomplete rhyme scheme)

  1. In all my dreams, before my helpless sight,
  2. He plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning. (imperfect meter)
  3. (creates a whole stanza for the event to show the speakers fixation on it)

  1. If in some smothering dreams you too could pace
  2. Behind the wagon that we flung him in,
  3. And watch the white eyes writhing in his face,
  4. His hanging face, like a devil's sick of sin; (11 syllables)
  5. If you could hear, at every jolt, the blood
  6. Come gargling from the froth-corrupted lungs,
  7. Obscene as cancer, bitter as the cud 
  8. Of vile, incurable sores on innocent tongues,  (12 syllables)
  9. My friend, you would not tell with such high zest
  10. To children ardent for some desperate glory, (11 syllables)
  11. The old Lie; Dulce et Decorum est (10 syllables)
  12. Pro patria mori. (6 syllables)
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Audience: Educators and the elite telling children to go to war

Theme:

De-glorification of war

Speaker:

  • War veteran talking to the elitist warmongers
  • Tone: Changes often but has a pattern
  • Stanza 1: Hopeless, tires; someone who has lost all drive. Shows how the warring conditions lead to mental disassembly of the fighting soldiers
  • Stanza 2: Restless and frantic. Panic all around, but in the last two line completely gobsmacked and horrified.
  • Stanza 3: Terrified but completely submersed in a flashback dream world
  • Stanza 4: Cynical and angry; almost aggressive

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