Creative Writing Short Story - Murder Court Case

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By Nikhil L

PROLOGUE

The Main character asks his best friends wife to marry him

She says yes

They go to celebrate at a pub with the main characters best friend

They meet drunken men who were hitting on the girl and pick up a fight with them

The best friend is stabbed by his opponent

The murderer makes his way to his house has a shower to remove the blood stains, call the cops who find the main character with a knife and arrest him for committing a murder

The dying man is accompanied by his wife to the hospital in an ambulance and she hears the whole story

A trial takes place and he is sentenced to 15 years of imprisonment

While in prison he makes a friend who is due to be a freeman in about a year…. he is his cell mate

The man who is due to be released looks very similar to the main character

He also maintains a diary… on his last day, just before he was to be released was killed in an unfortunate incident. A cell mate of his changed the name of the main character with his and now the next morning the main character was to be released the next morning as his friend and cell mate

After receiving a fortune which was left behind to him by his late grandfather, he decided to take revenge and a court judges and jury were summoned as fresh evidence was brought in…

 

MAIN STORY

Hatred, disgust and enmity had been built up in FelaxÖ dCaprio. He had been sentenced to 8 years of imprisonment for a crime that he did not commit, the murder of his best friend, his fiancé’s brother, Dave. They were the best of friends. It was a Friday, the 13th of November 2007 when  FelaxÖ had asked his fiancé and her brother to come with him to celebrate at the four seasons hotel in Washington DC. He remembered clearly, the drunken people he had met on their way; there were two of them who wanted to spend the night with his fiancée Terrie and wanted to share a “one nightstand” with her. Dave tried to protect his sister by fighting the drunken people while FelaxÖ was protecting her. Dave was stabbed by one of the men and FelaxÖ was shot (the bullet ended up at the back of his shoulder which he removed from his body in due time) and as he rushed to help him, the cops had arrived and seen FelaxÖ with a knife and Dave’s head resting on FelaxÖ’S lap. FelaxÖ was arrested and the drunken men produced concrete evidence in court which led to the imprisonment. His wife Terrie had earnestly tried to save him from a crime he did not commit and his lawyer did too. But they together could not prove that it was in fact one of the men who had committed the murder.

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 If only he had not proposed to Terrie that very day,

 If only they had not gone to the four seasons hotel,

 If only they had not gone there at 8:33,

 If only they did not meet the drunk men,

If only they hadn’t taken a narrow empty short-cut to the four seasons hotel that night,…

These thoughts were running through the mind of the person who had been the victim of miscarriage of justice as two well-built officers were taking him to his cell. “I didn’t do it” said FelaxÖ shouting and pleading for innocence he was ...

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