The Red Painting

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The Red Painting

Some people said that she moved away. Some people said she got lost one day. What really happened to that you girl from Redding? She went away just before her own wedding. But enough of these rhymes, because I’ve got a story. About just what happened to our dear young lady.

I walked up to the huge rusty gates in front of the old stately manor. I tried as I hard as I could to open the gates but they didn’t move. I yelled “hello” and asked for help when an old man appeared on the other side on the gate. Without asking whom I was or what I wanted he pulled opened the gates with an ease that I would have thought impossible. I walked through and I as I turned to say thank you, he was gone. Despite being a little puzzled by this I continued up the path to the front door. I pulled the long chain attached to the doorbell and it rung quite laud indeed. After a long wait the door finally swung open and an old woman appeared. She wasn’t very tall, about my height. She seemed rather sinister in the dull red dress she was wearing.

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The dress looked very worn. It had faded and looked to have been made at least 40 years earlier. “Come in my dear” she said. “Its cold outside. Her voice was warm and welcoming. It took away the previously eerie feeling about her. I stepped in and the door creaked shut behind me. It made me jump but the woman took no notice. “What is it you wanted my child.” She asked. I then replied with a slight stutter. “I was just curious about this place.” “Do you like it so far?” she asked. I simply said that I ...

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