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Quality of writing
The report doesn't contain any paragraphs, and this is a block of text. This is quite difficult to read in this format and should be separated into small paragraphs.
Level of analysis
The student accesses the ability of having a teacher rather than using self-study. The student states that the ability to ask questions is useful and an effective method of learning. This point is well explained and justified by the student. In addition, the student acknowledges that some students fail to focus on their studies, however there haven't fully explained this. The report could include 'Students can easily be sidetracked away from their studies, as studying is often quite boring and dull whereas other actives may be far more interesting. Thus, the student is more likely to undertake an activity anyway from studying'.
Response to question
In summary, the report is quite basic. The student has made some good points, however some of these aren't explained within detail or justified. In addition, the report could have been spilt into paragraphs. The student understands that 'some people' have different views on the best way of studying which shows the examiner that the student understands different methods of learning.