Development - A missing scene between the Bride, Leonardo and the Servant

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Missing scene between Bride, Leonardo and Servant:

Bride is sitting in front of a mirror plating her hair.

Leonardo walks in.

Leonardo: I need to talk to you.

Bride ignores Leonardo.

Leonardo: Please? 

Bride still ignores Leonardo.

Leonardo: Come on, please talk to me.

Touches Bride's cheek and hair and breaths in slowly. Bride shivers and leans against him. Leonardo and Bride move in sync with each other. 

First their hands meet, then they start to waltz to their words.

Soft waltz.

Leonardo: Remember the good old times? The laughing?

Bride freezes and shoves Leonardo back.

Bride: You broke my heart.

Fierce waltz.

Leonardo: The smell of your hair, the softness of your skin?

Soft waltz.

Bride: I... do.

Servant storms into the room.

Servant: What in Gods name are you doing? Get away from her you scavenger.

Steps in between Leonardo and Bride. Servant and Bride step away from Leonardo.

Servant: Don't touch her. Don't even look at her.

Servant and Bride step in to Leonardo who also steps in.

Leonardo: But why deny true love?

Servant and Bride step away from Leonardo who steps in the other direction again.

Servant: You left her, broke her, tinted her pureness and connected her to a family like yours. You have done more than enough damage here.

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Servant and Bride step towards Leonardo.

Leonardo: I can't help how I feel. This feeling of love that burns through my soul. Calling out to one woman, and that woman only.

Leonardo takes Brides hand.

Leonardo: I know you feel the same way.

Servant: No she does not.

Servant spins Bride off to the side as if still in a dance. Then turns to Leonardo and takes a step with every word she says.

Servant: You loved her, you moved on, you had a wedding which she did attend, she did all those too. But now you confess your love, ...

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